Sunsets in Cape Town

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*Cape Point Beach, 19H00* Logan:(blind folded) where are you taking me? Rhodes: keep em closed, don't open them. Logan: I'm already blind folded as it is. Rhodes: Almost there. Alright in
3...2..1...(takes the blind fold off) surprise!!!! Family members: Happy Birthday!!! Logan:(tears of Joy) oh Gawd! You did this for me? Rhodes: yes baby, happy birthday sweetheart. I love
you.(gives her a kiss) Logan: love you too. *...party is booming with Loud music...* Rhodes:(on the stage) excuse me...excuse me.(DJ Turns the music Down) Logan can u come up please. Logan:(walks
up the stage) Rhodes: I'd like to toast to Logans 25th birthday, we've been dating for about 6 years now and I wouldn't have choose anybody else to take this journey with me(gets on one knee)
Logan: (covers her mouth as tears roll out) Rhodes: Logan Visagie. I love everything about you and the only thing I want to change about you is your surname. Would you do me the honour and be my
wife? Crowd: Awwwww Logan: (crying) Yes...yes!...yes I will (as Rhodes puts the ring on)



*somewhere in Khaylitsha, 19h25pm* Lupita: Is the shipment ready? Dean: Yes boss lady. Its in the cars. Lupita: Good, we moving out in 10. Wheres Michael? Dean: I don't know, he said he will be
right back. Lupita: I hate incompetent people! How can he leave in a time like this! Call him! Dean: sure thing boss lady Lupita: Lord help me or I will kill someone. *....Phone Rings...* Lupita:
this is Nakia, talk to me. King: Well my people have arrived, the deal is still on right? Lupita: Yes...at the usually spot in 4 hours. King: Don't fuck with me or I will kill you. Lupita: keep
dreaming. (Hangs up) I hate that guy. Alright pack it up, we loving out!(looks at Dean) get me Sean on the phone. Dean: sure thing.



*Police Headquarters, 19h45pm* Loyiso:phone rings) Talk to me. Rodney: Its happening, its going down in 4 hours, I'll text you the details. Loyiso: Sure thing, well be there.(hangs up, text message
comes in) Alright (looks at the officer) Call Rhodes. Officer: yes sir. Loyiso:(takes the phone) come Rhodes pick up! Rhodes: Yiso talk to me. Loyiso: Seems like Logans birthday is goodluck, we
just got confirmation. Deal is going down in 4 hours. Rhodes: you get the address? Loyiso: yes. Rhodes: I'm on my way. I'll meet you there. Text me the address (Hangs up) Loyiso: alright boys we
gotta move. Let's go!! Let's go!!



*back at Cape Point beach* Rhodes: Logan I gotta head out. Logan: right now? Rhodes: Yes baby, this is going to change my career. I'm about to bust Notorious drug Queen Lupita Nakai. Logan: Go get
her. Rhodes: Seems like your birthday has brought me good luck. I'll see you soon baby. Logan:(gives him a kiss) I love you. Rhodes: love you too(heads out)



*4 hours later, 23h45 - Somewhere in Cape Town* Loyiso: (Behind the bushes) we gotta stay quiet until Rhodes gives the signal. Swat official: sure thing boss. *Rhodes pulls up on the front side and
heads inside* Rhodes:(over radio) alright, I want a clean Job. I've been chasing this woman for 5 years, I don't want her getting away. Stay alert and don't mess it up. Loyiso: Rhodes, 4 cars just
pulled up. They coming in beware. *the garage door opens and 4 cars pull up* Lupita:(comes out) I hate people who are late. *front door opens and 2 cars pull up* Lupita: your late. King: I'm here
ain't I? Lupita: let's just do this. I got the stuff, you have my money? King:(waves his hand) of course *a goon walks up carrying two duffle bags* King: 40 million as agreed upon. Lupita: the coke
is inside those two SUV's. King: go check it out. Lupita: wat you don't trust me? King: not really. Goon: all good boss. King: I love it when a good deal comes to an end. Rhodes: Confirmation! That
is Lupita Nakai! All teams move in! *the front door is knocked Down* Swat official: Don't move! Lupita: Oh Shit!!(gets in the car) waste these motherfuckers!!Shane!! Sean!! Lets move!!(they drive
out) Loyiso: Rhodes! Lupita is making a run for it!! Rhodes: Lupita is mine!(runs to his car and takes chase) *Lupita takes a exit onto the N1* Sean: someone is on us. Lupita:(looks in the Mirror)
well welcome Rhodes. Rhodes: You ain't getting away this time Nakai. Lupita: Shane take the wheel!(Shane takes the wheel) Lupita: Sean, let's take this fucker out! Rhodes:(opens fire at the car)
pull over the car! Lupita:(opens the sun roof) you gotta make me. Rhodes: have it your way(aims at the front wheel) Lupita: looks at Shane, love you brother. Shane: love you too. Lupita: whatever
happens, run and don't stop.(jumps out of the car) Shane: Lupita! Sean: Go she's fine! Rhodes:(pulls over) Lupita Nakai, put your hands up! Lupita: Detective Rhodes. Good to see you again.(points a
gun at him) I ain't going to jail. Rhodes: well that's for the court to decide. Lupita: Do it! Shoot me! Rhodes: I can only shoot you only if you open fire at me. Lupita: (cocks her gun) have it
your way(she feels a gun on her head) Loyiso: Its over Lupita. Rhodes: your reign is over. Its over Lupita, put the gun down. Lupita:(puts it down) Rhodes: Lupita Nakai, you have the right to
remain silent, anything you say can and will be used against you in the court of law. You have the right to an attorney, if you don't have one the law will appoint one for you. Lupita:(laughs) this
isn't over Detective. Rhodes' I beg to differ. Lupita: This is only the first round to a fifteen round bout.



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chapter 1

*Cape Point Beach, 19H00* Logan:(blind folded) where are you taking me? Rhodes: keep em closed, don't open them. Logan: I'm already blind folded as it is. Rhodes: Almost there. Alright in 3...2..1...(takes the blind fold off) surprise!!!! Family members: Happy Birthday!!! Logan:(tears of Joy) oh Gawd! You did this for me? Rhodes: yes baby, happy birthday sweetheart. I love you.(gives her a kiss) Logan: love you too. *...party is booming with Loud music...* Rhodes:(on the stage) excuse me...excuse me.(DJ Turns the music Down) Logan can u come up please. Logan:(walks up the stage) Rhodes: I'd like to toast to Logans 25th birthday, we've been dating for about 6 years now and I wouldn't have choose anybody else to take this journey with me(gets on one knee) Logan: (covers her mouth as tears roll out) Rhodes: Logan Visagie. I love everything about you and the only thing I want to change about you is your surname. Would you do me the honour and be my wife? Crowd: Awwwww Logan: (crying) Yes...yes!...yes I will (as Rhodes puts the ring on)

*somewhere in Khaylitsha, 19h25pm* Lupita: Is the shipment ready? Dean: Yes boss lady. Its in the cars. Lupita: Good, we moving out in 10. Wheres Michael? Dean: I don't know, he said he will be right back. Lupita: I hate incompetent people! How can he leave in a time like this! Call him! Dean: sure thing boss lady Lupita: Lord help me or I will kill someone. *....Phone Rings...* Lupita: this is Nakia, talk to me. King: Well my people have arrived, the deal is still on right? Lupita: Yes...at the usually spot in 4 hours. King: Don't fuck with me or I will kill you. Lupita: keep dreaming. (Hangs up) I hate that guy. Alright pack it up, we loving out!(looks at Dean) get me Sean on the phone. Dean: sure thing.

*Police Headquarters, 19h45pm* Loyiso:phone rings) Talk to me. Rodney: Its happening, its going down in 4 hours, I'll text you the details. Loyiso: Sure thing, well be there.(hangs up, text message comes in) Alright (looks at the officer) Call Rhodes. Officer: yes sir. Loyiso:(takes the phone) come Rhodes pick up! Rhodes: Yiso talk to me. Loyiso: Seems like Logans birthday is goodluck, we just got confirmation. Deal is going down in 4 hours. Rhodes: you get the address? Loyiso: yes. Rhodes: I'm on my way. I'll meet you there. Text me the address (Hangs up) Loyiso: alright boys we gotta move. Let's go!! Let's go!!

*back at Cape Point beach* Rhodes: Logan I gotta head out. Logan: right now? Rhodes: Yes baby, this is going to change my career. I'm about to bust Notorious drug Queen Lupita Nakai. Logan: Go get her. Rhodes: Seems like your birthday has brought me good luck. I'll see you soon baby. Logan:(gives him a kiss) I love you. Rhodes: love you too(heads out)

*4 hours later, 23h45 - Somewhere in Cape Town* Loyiso: (Behind the bushes) we gotta stay quiet until Rhodes gives the signal. Swat official: sure thing boss. *Rhodes pulls up on the front side and heads inside* Rhodes:(over radio) alright, I want a clean Job. I've been chasing this woman for 5 years, I don't want her getting away. Stay alert and don't mess it up. Loyiso: Rhodes, 4 cars just pulled up. They coming in beware. *the garage door opens and 4 cars pull up* Lupita:(comes out) I hate people who are late. *front door opens and 2 cars pull up* Lupita: your late. King: I'm here ain't I? Lupita: let's just do this. I got the stuff, you have my money? King:(waves his hand) of course *a goon walks up carrying two duffle bags* King: 40 million as agreed upon. Lupita: the coke is inside those two SUV's. King: go check it out. Lupita: wat you don't trust me? King: not really. Goon: all good boss. King: I love it when a good deal comes to an end. Rhodes: Confirmation! That is Lupita Nakai! All teams move in! *the front door is knocked Down* Swat official: Don't move! Lupita: Oh Shit!!(gets in the car) waste these motherfuckers!!Shane!! Sean!! Lets move!!(they drive out) Loyiso: Rhodes! Lupita is making a run for it!! Rhodes: Lupita is mine!(runs to his car and takes chase) *Lupita takes a exit onto the N1* Sean: someone is on us. Lupita:(looks in the Mirror) well welcome Rhodes. Rhodes: You ain't getting away this time Nakai. Lupita: Shane take the wheel!(Shane takes the wheel) Lupita: Sean, let's take this fucker out! Rhodes:(opens fire at the car) pull over the car! Lupita:(opens the sun roof) you gotta make me. Rhodes: have it your way(aims at the front wheel) Lupita: looks at Shane, love you brother. Shane: love you too. Lupita: whatever happens, run and don't stop.(jumps out of the car) Shane: Lupita! Sean: Go she's fine! Rhodes:(pulls over) Lupita Nakai, put your hands up! Lupita: Detective Rhodes. Good to see you again.(points a gun at him) I ain't going to jail. Rhodes: well that's for the court to decide. Lupita: Do it! Shoot me! Rhodes: I can only shoot you only if you open fire at me. Lupita: (cocks her gun) have it your way(she feels a gun on her head) Loyiso: Its over Lupita. Rhodes: your reign is over. Its over Lupita, put the gun down. Lupita:(puts it down) Rhodes: Lupita Nakai, you have the right to remain silent, anything you say can and will be used against you in the court of law. You have the right to an attorney, if you don't have one the law will appoint one for you. Lupita:(laughs) this isn't over Detective. Rhodes' I beg to differ. Lupita: This is only the first round to a fifteen round bout.

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