Deadly Paradise

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


A commercial crew will experience and encounter something they never wished to see.

Submitted: May 27, 2018

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Inside a van, a tourism commercial crew are heading to an isolated beach resort. The crew includes the actresses Rachel Palmer and Diana Feldman, actor Mike Zuffon, director Geord Hawkins, and other crew Jennifer, Matt and Eric. As they arrive at the resort, they were welcomed by the resort caretakers, Ellen and Johnson.Later, they booked different rooms. Rachel, Diana and Jennifer were roommates while Matt and Geord are roommates. Meanwhile, Matt and Eric were roommates on a farther room. That afternoon, Ellen gives the crew some free lunch. Rachel became friends with some tourists, Mickey and Fely. Later, Eric goes for a swim while Diana, Geord and Jennifer boarded a boat for a tour. As the night came, Jennifer heard screams but was distracted by a whistling kettle. As they sleep, an unknown person suddenly came inside their room and got something in their drawer. In the morning, Rachel finds Mickey and Fely but there are no traces of them. She was curious because Mickey and Fely told her that they will stay for 2 more days at the resort. Later, the crew swam at the beach and Jennifer was almost drowned. Inside the hotel, Rachel was curious and decides to follow Ellen and Johnson through a secret room. She captures them with a phone camera and find them hiding something from a room with a metal door. Rachel tries to sneak inside as Ellen and Johnson leaves. After many tries, Rachel successfully opens the metal door by damaging the knob. Rachel discovers Mickey's mutilated body inside and she captures it with a camera. Ellen arrives and Rachel hides. Rachel watches in horror as Mickey was butchered and his body parts are thrown onto a basin. Rachel escapes after Ellen departs, but she was secretly seen by Johnson. The group assembled as they started to shoot the commercial. As Rachel arrives, she told the group to flee and shows them some pictures and videos of Ellen butchering Mickey. Ellen saw them. As the crew arrived at the hotel, they were followed by Ellen, as Johnson was locking the whole hotel with metal plates. As the crew finish packing, they realized they were locked inside the hotel and no way out. They went to the first floor, and assembled with other vacationers, Jude, Sharon, Kristoff, Miguel and Yna. Jude and Sharon went upstairs to find Ellen and Johnson while Rachel reminds the remaining people to be alert because they were psychopaths. As Sharon urinates and Jude was waiting outside, Jude was quietly killed with an axe. As Sharon finishes, she was attacked by a masked Johnson and tortures her by wounding her face onto a mirror and attacking her with a curtain rod. Johnson finishes her by stabbing her repeatedly. The crew decided to go to the room where Mickey was butchered and find some pathways out. As they went inside, Kristoff and Miguel acted as guards. The crew unlocked a narrow tube that leads to unknown. Jennifer went through the tube and told them that she was led to a dusty room. The others follow. As Yna's turn comes, she witnessed Kristoff and Miguel being murdered by Johnson. Johnson kills the two with an axe on forehead. Yna went through the tube but was stuck. The crew successfully frees Yna. They blocked the hole and believes Johnson didn't pass the hole anymore. The group was led to secret rooms in the hotel. Every room has mutilated bodies. As the group keep opening the secret room doors, Matt was quietly kidnapped and then had the throat slit, without noticing by everyone. The group went to first floor and found something wrapped im christmas wrapper.Rachel approaches the thing and opens it. As she opened it, she saw three hearts full of blood. Rachel screams in terror, as Mike was decapitated with a swinging blade. The group went upstairs and search for Matt but discovers his body afterwards. Jennifdr cries at Matt's corpse while Geord was shot with an arrow. Rachel, Diana, Jennifer, Eric and Yna barricade themselves on an office. They found some weapons there they must use. They planned to trap the killer but was unfortunate as Ellen sabotages their trap. Eric was soon kidnapped by Ellen and decapitates him by bending his neck violently. Rachel, Diana, Jennifer and Yna were stuck in the room. Yna notices a hole and volunteers to be the first to go to remind if it's safe or not. Diana puts her ear at the door to hear what's happening. Johnson arrives with an axe and wounds Diana's ear as Rachel and Jennifer scream in terror. The three went up the hole and Johnson damages the hole with a ground driller. The girls were led to a room. As they went to the second room, they were locked inside by Ellen, as if it is the second and last room there. The girls noticed a hole blocked by furnitures and helped each other. They saw a hole and Rachel decides to go in. Rachel saw that it was block and they managed to see a large ground driller hidden in one of the furnitures. Rachel destroys it and saw a way out. The others escape, but when Jennifer's turn came, she was stuck because of her height. Ellen approaches and kills her with an axe. Rachel watches in horror as Jennifer's face was impaled with a large ground driller. Ellen and Johnson chase Rachel, Diana and Yna into the woods and their eyes were caught in a barbed wire trap. They successfully escaped. Rachel decidss to climb up a tree and looks for way out. Rachel convinces Diana and Yna to go up too because the two were near. Rachel and Diana walks to the branches onto the other side. Yna, scared of heights, went down the tree and decided to hide behind. Yna was soon caught by Ellen and the two watches in horror as Yna was slowly tortured and slashed to death. Rachel was seen by Ellen. Rachel gets Johnson's axe and kills Johnson with an axe. Ellen wounds her neck with a knife. Rachel and Diana flee out. The two reached their car but Ellen grabs Diana's hair. Rachel manages to cut Ellen's hand but Ellen breaks their window, attacking the two. Ellen drags Diana out. Diana was stabbed to death. As Rachel started the engine, she moved backwards, crushing Ellen's neck. Rachel went out and noticed Ellen under. Rachel repeatedly crushes Ellen under. Rachel gets Diana but realized she died. Rachel grabs a bleeding Diana to the car, hoping she will be treated. Rachel realizes that they were out of gas, sabotaged by Ellen earlier. Rachel walks out, carrying Diana.


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