The Eldritch Author
Short Story by: The Eldritch Author
Reads: 401 | Likes: 2 | Shelves: 0 | Comments: 2
Submitted: June 01, 2018
© Copyright 2021 The Eldritch Author. All rights reserved.
Comments
Nice story, very easy to read and enjoyable. The characters are sufficiently described and the protagonist is quite relatable. The story has good pacing, maybe a little faster than i would prefer but definitely not too fast for a short story. The plot is consistent and the main idea is introduced early and fleshed out till the very end which is a big plus. There were parts of it that gave me the chills , like the ending , but I genuinely felt that all the other scary scenes could have more impact if the scene and mood was developed for a little longer. All in all, it is a good short story with a cool twist in end and it makes me wanna read more of your stories in the future. Keep up the good work and have a nice day.
Tue, June 5th, 2018 3:07pmMore Horror Short Stories
Boosted Content from Other Authors
Book / Other
Book / Fantasy
Poem / Romance
Boosted Content from Premium Members
Short Story / Horror
Book / Romance
Book / Fantasy
Book / Romance
Other Content by The Eldritch Author
Short Story / Horror
Book / Humor
Book / Fantasy
hullabaloo22
The idea of a student being alone for a lecture was strange enough, but this really got kind of creepy. M.A.
Sat, June 2nd, 2018 7:23pmI remeber reading Lovecraft but a long time ago now.
Author
Reply
Thank you!
Wed, June 6th, 2018 12:44am