The Unraveling

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Contently Deranged Travelers


It calls all of us.


This noise in my chest;
A ravenous scratching
Like claws from within.
What is this happening?

The strangest sensation;
This cavity rattling.
My blood all aflame
And vision abandoning.

Everyone's vanished
The daylight's dampening.
All beneath crumbles;
Sky above blackening.

I don't understand!
It's so very baffling.
Could they be right?
I've joined the Unraveling?


Submitted: June 17, 2018

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hullabaloo22

One word for this, M. A. -- excellent!

Sun, June 17th, 2018 7:00pm

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I'm glad! Thank you

Sun, June 17th, 2018 4:05pm

tom mcmullen

Good one!

Wed, June 27th, 2018 9:08am

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Thank you!

Wed, June 27th, 2018 6:23am

unmasked delusions

I like the rhyme: "a ravenous scratching ... What is this happening" and very unsettling with that last line

Tue, July 10th, 2018 5:25am

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Thanks! I always aim to bring out the deranged hahaha

Mon, July 9th, 2018 11:44pm

unmasked delusions

I forgot to say in my comment that I agree; it seems to call us all at some point in one way or another.

Tue, July 10th, 2018 5:27am

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No worries. Agreed!

Mon, July 9th, 2018 11:47pm

Sharief Hendricks

It sure does call all of us...

Brilliant !!!!

Mon, June 29th, 2020 10:04pm

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