He judged her then lost her

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


People create an image of who people really are in their minds without verifying if it is true. Hopefully this piece makes you realize how this is wrong

Submitted: June 21, 2018

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He grabbed her wrist and stared at the scars. He didn’t know it wasn’t a blade that caused them it was the whip of her boss. He stared into her eyes and just under he saw the bags under her eyes. It wasn’t partying that caused those bags but the long hours of work she had to do to earn a living. He looked at her hair thin as if it were falling. He didn’t know she had no time to take care of her hair when she needed to take care of her family. He looked back at her slit wrists and noticed she was skinnier than others she wasn’t anorexic she just couldn’t make enough for her to eat. She saw him trying to hold back tears and she didn’t think he was weak but that he was strong enough to care. He did care but not for her. He cared that he fell in love with a mess. His head spinning and his eyes full of water he rushed to his seat and didn’t even look at her. How could he for she was a mess to him. After class he ran his mouth yelling obscenities at her. Quickly after he lost her but not too long later realized he made the biggest mistake of his life. Don’t judge too quickly


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