An Ailing Shadow

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic

Featured Review on this writing by BriannasBooks


This is the sequel to the story Izle

Table of Contents

Shrouded in Darkness


Izle and his new partners face new enemies
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Attempt to Locate


Mysteries are uncovered, and true colors are shown.
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A Dying Storm


the final fight to defeat the bringer of plagues
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Recent Comments

Luna Abbot

Really descriptive.
Too many commas! The opening was getting my attention only for that commas to ruin it! It's like having to break a car after only just hitting the gas!
Scourge is a scary character.

Fri, August 17th, 2018 6:27am

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Thank you!

Fri, August 17th, 2018 9:11am

BriannasBooks

I like that you kept this story nice and action-packed, and launched right into the action right away. Leaving it on a cliffhanger was also nice because it gives the reader something to look forward to for the next chapter. Other than a few grammar mistakes, this was well done and very descriptive :)

Fri, December 21st, 2018 2:21am

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Thank you so much!

Fri, December 21st, 2018 8:15am

Christy Writes

You are really good with action sequences, and the descriptions give just the necessary amount of details. I haven't read the prequel so I don't know much about the main characters. What I got was that they're heroes of some kind?
The story just needs a bit of polishing to stand out. It needs to be punctuated better, and perhaps make the text left to right rather than center?

Sun, February 3rd, 2019 9:08pm

Author
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Thank you so much for your feedback!

Sun, February 3rd, 2019 1:13pm

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