Can't break through
with verbal crush ,
can't break through
to me .
Can't break through
to my instinctive heart ,
can't break into
it's cavity.
It is designed
to love you so ,
and protect us from
the falling blows.
It recognizes
the truth in your eyes ,
and recognizes
strangers in disguise.
Allow another beat
to be leapt out of sync ,
your presence can't cease
to anxious me.
It knows your beauty
like it knows my eyes,
will linger in the sight
of your entice.
Feel mine against yours
feel yours against mine ,
two hearts intoxicated
on love's chemical bind.
Can't break through
with the world's dispute ,
over how far
it should commute.
Displeased the mistaken
with tragedy ,
for my whole world lies
in two cavities.
Feel mine against yours
feel yours against mine,
allow another beat
out of sync and out of time..
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This is so romantic Chris. You seem to write about a specific person quite often. Perhaps , your wife? Girlfriend? But I bet your words also touch other women as well. Well the ones who read is what I mean. They may hope to find a guy like you who will say all these Devine things to or about them. Or they may wish that the man they are with would say these things and describe his feelings like you seem to do in a lot of your work. Your poetry stands out far and beyond and is filled with romance , and feeling. So much feeling that the readers can feel it themselves. You have a rare gift Chris . I don't know what you do for a living , but I think you are missing your calling. Seriously. Your work is like nothing that I have ever read before. Spectacular Chris. Oh by the way , before you ask where I've been , I was on vacation just got home from salt lake city. I may post a few poems soon , but probably not a lot or as often because I mainly joined this site to read others work. It was a very enjoyable read Chris.
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Thanks Edward . Good to hear from you again. Yeah I was about to ask where you have been , but now I know. I thought maybe you decided this site wasn't for you or something. Yeah , I dream every day that my love for writing will turn into something more. Maybe even a lifelong career. But , I am mainly a poet, not a novelist , I can write novels because I have before quite a long time ago ,and getting paid for poetry is hard these days. There doesn't seem to be near as much money in it as there was years ago. And you have to get published and pay money , you have to sponsor your work, etc.. And then make a collection and sell . And royalties , you only get a certain percentage , the publishers get a percentage as well. There's a lot involved in it . Yeah , well atleast if i dont get paid to do it , I know that many people enjoy reading so it still pays off. And I am not going to stop writing regardless. It's what I do and what I've always done for ...as long as I can remember. Even back when I was in grade school. First grade even. Idk how I write the things I do. Maybe some people just have a knack for it. But thanks for reading, Edward. Welcome back.
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