Tom's A Cold
Tom's a cold
Tom's a fool,
The reflection in the mirror
Is an ugly ghoul,
The portraits on the wall
Are goblins that drool,
And there's weird faces
In the toilet stools,
These winter night's
Are so cruel,
I could pray to the lord above
But that would be uncool!
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It's a great poem. It's really short but also strong. I really love it. The first four lines are awesome. And the last two lines really got me.
Thanks Maria, Tom must have been a bit paranoid that night!
Hey, I think I got how you look now. That was a nice picture of you. :D
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Glad you like it Denina, my internet been disconnected but I'm back now!
Great poem!
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Thanks for reading Nick and making a kind comment!
Wow! no other word.
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Thanks very much C.A.A. for your kind comment!
Love it
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Thanks very much Nick, hope you are well and stay that way!
Thanks bro I’m doing good. hope you stay good and safe too!
I really liked the rhyming.
Great work!
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Thanks very much Criss, it's winter here at the moment but I've got the heater on!
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