Tom's A Cold

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


HORROR. HUMOUR. IT'S WINTER!


Tom's A Cold

 

Tom's a cold

Tom's a fool,

The reflection in the mirror

Is an ugly ghoul,

The portraits on the wall

Are goblins that drool,

And there's weird faces

In the toilet stools,

These winter night's

Are so cruel,

I could pray to the lord above

But that would be uncool!


Submitted: July 14, 2018

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MARIA KURENAI SHINOHARA

It's a great poem. It's really short but also strong. I really love it. The first four lines are awesome. And the last two lines really got me.

Fri, September 14th, 2018 7:52pm

tom mcmullen

Thanks Maria, Tom must have been a bit paranoid that night!

Fri, September 14th, 2018 11:46pm

Derina Peng

Hey, I think I got how you look now. That was a nice picture of you. :D

Wed, June 5th, 2019 1:43am

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Glad you like it Denina, my internet been disconnected but I'm back now!

Tue, June 4th, 2019 10:26pm

Nick meraglio

Great poem!

Fri, July 12th, 2019 2:49pm

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Thanks for reading Nick and making a kind comment!

Fri, July 12th, 2019 4:28pm

C.A.A.

Wow! no other word.

Thu, December 26th, 2019 7:25pm

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Thanks very much C.A.A. for your kind comment!

Thu, December 26th, 2019 1:25pm

Nick meraglio

Love it

Fri, April 3rd, 2020 5:15am

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Thanks very much Nick, hope you are well and stay that way!

Fri, April 3rd, 2020 12:03am

Nick meraglio

Thanks bro I’m doing good. hope you stay good and safe too!

Fri, April 3rd, 2020 3:21pm

Criss Sole

I really liked the rhyming.
Great work!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 12:05pm

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Thanks very much Criss, it's winter here at the moment but I've got the heater on!

Sun, June 28th, 2020 5:42am

Olga Possokhova

Hi, Tom. I've never read horror poems before! I find this one very cool.

Thu, August 20th, 2020 8:37am

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You're very kind Olga, horror's great fun, as long as it's not the evening news!

Thu, August 20th, 2020 2:25am

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