Tom's A Cold
Tom's a cold
Tom's a fool,
The reflection in the mirror
Is an ugly ghoul,
The portraits on the wall
Are goblins that drool,
And there's weird faces
In the toilet stools,
These winter night's
Are so cruel,
I could pray to the lord above
But that would be uncool!
Submitted: July 14, 2018
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Thanks Maria, Tom must have been a bit paranoid that night!
Fri, September 14th, 2018 11:46pm
Hey, I think I got how you look now. That was a nice picture of you. :D
Wed, June 5th, 2019 1:43am
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Glad you like it Denina, my internet been disconnected but I'm back now!
Tue, June 4th, 2019 10:26pm
Great poem!
Fri, July 12th, 2019 2:49pm
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Thanks for reading Nick and making a kind comment!
Fri, July 12th, 2019 4:28pm
Wow! no other word.
Thu, December 26th, 2019 7:25pm
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Thanks very much C.A.A. for your kind comment!
Thu, December 26th, 2019 1:25pm
Love it
Fri, April 3rd, 2020 5:15am
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Thanks very much Nick, hope you are well and stay that way!
Fri, April 3rd, 2020 12:03am
Thanks bro I’m doing good. hope you stay good and safe too!
Fri, April 3rd, 2020 3:21pm
I really liked the rhyming.
Great work!
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Thanks very much Criss, it's winter here at the moment but I've got the heater on!
Sun, June 28th, 2020 5:42am
Hi, Tom. I've never read horror poems before! I find this one very cool.
Thu, August 20th, 2020 8:37am
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You're very kind Olga, horror's great fun, as long as it's not the evening news!
Thu, August 20th, 2020 2:25amFacebook Comments
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MARIA KURENAI SHINOHARA
It's a great poem. It's really short but also strong. I really love it. The first four lines are awesome. And the last two lines really got me.
Fri, September 14th, 2018 7:52pm