Within My Hands

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


Even in death, Love breaks beyond its boundaries.


I feel you in my hands,

Touched by my caress,

That warm and comfort feeling,

That wipes away your distress.

Forever you’ll be there,

In these hands that bring you love,

That warm and comfort feeling,

That from your heart is bleeding.


Submitted: July 18, 2018

© Copyright 2021 Ashley K.. All rights reserved.

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Joy Shaw

Poem evokes images of heart-broken young love. Nice write.

Thu, July 19th, 2018 3:56am

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Thank you Joy for the kind comment and for reading my poem. I wasnt trying to make it sound heart-breaking but everyone has their own unigue perspective of the poem which in truth the poem could mean different things. Thank you again Joy.

Thu, July 19th, 2018 3:48am

hullabaloo22

A heart freely given will always remain. A strong poem with Gothic tones.

Thu, July 19th, 2018 8:18pm

Author
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Thank you Hully for the comment. Much appreciated.

Thu, July 19th, 2018 2:50pm

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