A poem that talks about dreams’ delights.



Dream

Just dream and submerge into subconscious thoughts

To make mistakes without consequences

To watch all the possibilities without inferences.

 

Dream

What is there to lose?

What is there to choose?

Figure out what must be figured out.

 

Dream

Dream freely and painlessly

Don’t get judged by your dreams,

But by your mistaken schemes.

 

Dream

Gain experiences

Let everything come into place

Whilst meeting memories with grace.

 

Dream

Like the smoke of a bonfire

Slowly ascending higher

Yet dissolving into clear desires.

 

Dream

With powers and feelings

Healing the scars of pain

Breaking free of burdening chains.

 

Dream

Flying across new moments,

Frozen components and thoughts

To be tied together as knots.

 

Dream

Let your mind be free

For as long as it gives the key

To make your heart breathe with glee.

 

Dream

Nothing is cuffed to reality

Thoughts being put into inquiry

Only to get answers from mere queries.

 

Dream

Nights over paradises, twilights over mazes

Mixed with loving phrases of places

Marked with changes above lost traces.

 

Dream

The most basic right

To let anyone write

What must be written for the world’s delight.



Submitted: July 20, 2018

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Raven Akuma

Hiya, I saw your quickee to read this poem. I'm glad you told me too- this is AMAZING!

I'm amazed by your wording; such strong vocabulary that invokes strong emotion, yet also flowing to provide good readability. The rhyme scheme helped with that very well, too. I also like the repetition of the word 'dream' for each verse. It centers all that powerful vocabulary on dreams. really showing the magic behind such a simple thing. I love it! Great work!! :)

Fri, July 20th, 2018 11:19pm

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Thank you so much for your nice comments!! :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed it so much!! n.n

Sat, July 21st, 2018 12:01pm

Nyesha

I like it, it is encouraging, especially when your dream is high. I pretty much love the message lol

Fri, July 20th, 2018 11:43pm

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Thank you so much!! :)

Sat, July 21st, 2018 12:11pm

Sean Terrence Best

Thank you for inviting me to read your poem, Ana. Your deeply expressed sentiments of inspiration are encouraging and elegantly mythological in spirit. Your 'twilights over mazes' conception is mysteriously intriguing like a fantastic dreamscape on an alien world. Beautiful poem, Ana, truly sensational.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 3:02am

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Thank you so much for your opinion and nice comments!! :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed it! n.n

Sat, July 21st, 2018 12:35pm

Silgorious

I really loved the poem! There was a nice, charming and light tone in the poem, making the reader appreciate the blessing of good dreams, which are uplifting and enjoyable, without any barriers whatsoever.

There are times when we need dreams to make us face the difficulties of life, and at times, these surely help us becoming stronger and better.

Very well written, and worth reading again and again, with a bit of tune and rhythm.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 3:02am

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Thank you so much!! n.n
I totally agree with you!! :)
Dreams are one of life's precious aspects we must not ignore.
Thank you again for the nice comments and feedback!! :D You made me smile!! n.n

Sat, July 21st, 2018 1:28pm

T. E. Jackson

Very nicely written. I'm not the biggest on poetry, but I can appreciate a well written work. Your vocabulary, wording, flow, etc, was all well done. You painted an interesting picture in my mind. Great job.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 6:21am

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Thank you so much for the nice comments and feedback!! :) I'm happy that you liked it!!

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 1:12pm

MuileTheBard

It's a great pleasure to read the dreams meaning to some writer. My words can be; dream to love, to continue… Thank you for this poem Ana.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 9:52am

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Thank you so much CursedFeanor for reading it and liking it!! n.n I really appreciate it!! :)

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 1:16pm

aleeha

awesome ana:)

Sat, July 21st, 2018 11:06am

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Thank you so much!! :)

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 1:32pm

Shakespeare JR

Fantastic. Read my poems as well

Sat, July 21st, 2018 12:43pm

Author
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Thank you so much! :) And of course :)

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 1:59pm

Jean Rance

Thanks for inviting me to read this very inspiring and encouraging poem. I love it. ?

Sat, July 21st, 2018 1:33pm

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Thank you so much for your time in reading it!! n.n I'm really happy that you loved it!! :)

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 6:45pm

Aabis

Hi,Ana. Thanks for inviting me. I am feeling glad to read this poem. Of course it's nicely done. Thanks again.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 2:33pm

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Thank you for reading it!! I'm glad that you liked it!! n.n

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 7:15pm

Melancholic Wisdom

I really like this, you've made a lovely poem. Your rhymes and your imagery was really good, plus the constant repetition of Dream at the start of every stanza was a nice touch, as well. The message is great as well, I feel as though many people just forget how to dream and/or be creative as they get older. And it's so important to never stop dreaming because sometimes that is the only thing that keeps you sane. Well done, I'm so glad you reached out to me, because you're a great writer!

Sat, July 21st, 2018 4:27pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! You really made me smile!! n.n
I'm really happy that you liked it!! :)

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 1:13am

Doria sanders

Nice work I absolutely love it... This is really good

Sat, July 21st, 2018 8:51pm

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Thank you so much!! :D

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 12:01pm

ChristopherErick

Incredible writing. So poetically expressed and flows with rhythm. Enjoyed reading.

Sat, July 21st, 2018 10:54pm

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Thank you so much!! n.n I'm happy that you enjoyed it!! :)

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 8:01pm

S.R.B. Gray

Thanks for the invite to read this!

I am honestly not the biggest fan of poems, but I quite liked this one. I have pretty vivd dreams myself, so reading a poem about one seems to hit me close to home.

Good job! I really liked this!

Sat, July 21st, 2018 11:11pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments and feedback!! n.n I'm really glad that you liked it!!

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 10:26pm

Quality Girl

If you believe in it even for years it will eventually come true. I have a dream myself so far it almost come true. Dreams come true just like Cinderella did. I keep my hopes of the Dream by making it alive to me, dancing and singing like the dream will come true. My dream is finding love, so I dance like no ones business. ????

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 1:19am

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That's very nice to say! Thank you for your comment! n.n

Sat, July 28th, 2018 12:26pm

Sylvermyst

Great poem and it has a great message.

Sun, July 22nd, 2018 2:16am

Author
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Thank you so much for your feedback!! :)

Sat, July 28th, 2018 12:28pm

The Eldritch Author

I like the message. Very whimsical in a way, like a dream of floating clouds and being a liberation to the dreamer.

Keep up the great work!

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 11:33am

Author
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Thank you so much for your feedback and nice comments!! n.n
I'm glad that you liked it!! :D

Sat, July 28th, 2018 5:36pm

shadowgate

This was really deep. You sure hit head on about dreams having no consequences and for the most part they don't.

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 6:18pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! n.n

Sun, August 19th, 2018 11:31am

S. Rasmussen

Nice poem, however a bit long in my opinion
A nice poem about the freedoms and natures of dreams
I liked the format of the verses, it flowed well
I would have loved it if it was shorter

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 7:22pm

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Thank you so much for your feedback! :) I'm glad that you liked it!

Sun, August 19th, 2018 11:49am

danielSmith

Great job with this work! I'm not much of a poem writer myself, but this poem was really good at showing how dreams can help us through simple words. Also, the rhyming words helped the story go along nicely.

Mon, July 23rd, 2018 10:00pm

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Thank you so much!! :D I'm really happy that you liked it!! n.n

Sun, August 19th, 2018 11:56am

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