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"This is a beautiful poem and I love the structure "
How long, O how long will it be
Until you will notice me?
Must I be like your friend
Or your own enemy
To be part of reality?
How long, O how long are you blind
That it's me you cannot find?
Your face you think you see
Because the water is clear.
However, I do not appear.
How long, O how long will you dream?
Wake up! We can be a team.
We can resist our foe,
Keep the friends we know,
And I, Yourself, welcomed home.
Submitted: August 14, 2018
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Nice!
Thu, October 21st, 2021 12:53pm
Beautiful poem :)
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Ashley I Read
This is a beautiful poem and I love the structure
Fri, November 30th, 2018 11:01pmAuthor
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Thank you for your encouraging words and support.
Fri, November 30th, 2018 5:42pm