A night in the city

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Vintage Publishing


Thank you, New York City; my hometown.



What a night of burning fire,

You gave me all that I desire.

To have you here so close to me,

A sight that’s unforgettably.

The warmest day; the freshest night,

Making love at such a height.

The skyscraper and the view,

The perfect night I spent with you.

I felt so happy; I felt so pretty,

We’ll always have New York City.

Where all my dreams did come true,

And it was all because of you.

Endless pleasure; endless laughter,

A drunken night and much thereafter.

You gave me peace; you gave me bliss,

Ardent ecstasy from your kiss.

I was your queen; at least that night,

Our time in New York I will hold tight.

And I’ll look back on you and me,

In Manhattan; Floor: forty-three.



Submitted: August 21, 2018

© Copyright 2021 jaylisbeth. All rights reserved.

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Sue Harris

Wow, this is fantastic, JB. Such decadence, passion and wonderful imagery! Loved it my friend! Great writing!

Tue, August 21st, 2018 12:27pm

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Why, thank you, Sue, this piece means a lot to me :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 5:35am

Adam L.

Welp! Lis I am left with chills. Whoa, sensual and romantic poem. Sounds like a fantasy come to life. Nice work, amiga mia.

Tue, August 21st, 2018 1:13pm

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Aha, thank you, amigo :) it came from the heart.

Tue, August 21st, 2018 6:16am

TheSinningCrow

They always say that your heart will never be fulfilled until you return home. This is some of the most passionate writing I have seen from you. It tells that New York meant so much to you, and I am so happy to see you in this mood. This is you smiling with your heart, and it is beautiful. See more days like this, and you will be the highest skyscraper in New York. This poem has come deeply from your heart, and the image of New York is inside every heartbeat you take. You show love for something, and this is the passionate reactions that you get. What a beautiful poem with gorgeous imagery. So Pro of you Lisbeth :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 4:03pm

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Thank you, dearest friend of mine :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 10:36am

Mike S.

I've got some bad news for you, J. B. I've never been to New York City, so whoever you were with, it wasn't me--no, excellent, J.B!

Tue, August 21st, 2018 4:42pm

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Ha! uh-oh, busted! lol. Thank you, Mike :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 10:35am

hullabaloo22

Romantic escapism at it's finest. Good job with this write, jaylisbeth.

Tue, August 21st, 2018 5:29pm

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Thank you most kindly, Hully

Tue, August 21st, 2018 10:35am

Melancholic Wisdom

Fantastic, the imagery was stunning. I've always wanted to go to NYC, but have yet to do so haha. The vibe was so romantic and sensual, the passion was pouring out of every word. Well done :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 6:40pm

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Thank you, MW :) I love NYC, however, not too fond of the cold lol. Thank you!

Tue, August 21st, 2018 4:24pm

Jeff Bezaire

A true sense of romance on the perfect night, Lis. It sounds like a whirlwind night of passion and delight; a breathtaking time. Beautifully written.

Wed, August 22nd, 2018 12:13am

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Thank you greatly, Jeff :)

Tue, August 21st, 2018 5:29pm

Criss Sole

I am so glad you had such a good time on your trip. What a romantic and passionate poem. Good memories like that will last a life time. You captured all the excitement and adventure so well.

Wed, August 22nd, 2018 5:30am

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Thank you so very much, Criss :)

Wed, August 22nd, 2018 6:09am

genericman

flowed like hot lava pouring out of a volcano..You speak pretty much in a past tense as if it was a fantastic night that may not be repeated.Reminds me of the great old beach boys song of the 60's called "What A Night".....in part...What a Lady What A Night...I didn't even know her name...
Loved the sincerity of this poem..

Wed, August 29th, 2018 11:31am

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Thank you very much for your kind comment :) It was a fantastic night that I doubt I'd ever have again.

Wed, August 29th, 2018 6:53am

Spyguy

In love & life, and bliss you play... So rich, so full, so lively, gay!
My friend, your words do help me fly; Off, away, to work, to try...
To make a difference, be the one; Underneath the parching sun!

Wed, August 29th, 2018 2:46pm

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This poem means so much to me, Spy. Thank you, dear friend :)

Wed, August 29th, 2018 7:47am

KJGG1230

I know what you mean.

Wed, September 5th, 2018 2:36pm

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Why, thank you :)

Wed, September 5th, 2018 7:37am

Grace 96-M

Sometimes i just open this site to check my stats and then each time i come across your name and i open. I can tell you this: its never disappointing. Good piece!

Sat, September 8th, 2018 4:34pm

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Well, why, thank you so much for that :)

Sat, September 8th, 2018 5:37pm

moa rider

I've never been to New York Jay, but Frank seemed to think it's good too. I'm pleased your dreams came true there. Usianguke

Sat, September 8th, 2018 8:29pm

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Thank you, Moa. I absolutely love my hometown :)

Sat, September 8th, 2018 5:38pm

Joy Shaw

Okay, that was simply put hot. Love your attention to detail in this, and the way you so eloquently weave in her feelings of adoration and passion for her guy. Nicely written.

Sun, September 23rd, 2018 12:36pm

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Aww, why thank you, Joy :) This is a very personal poem for me

Mon, September 24th, 2018 6:39am

Angela Villaverde

Bien sexy, fui fuiu!

Fri, October 5th, 2018 12:47am

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Ha ha!

Mon, October 8th, 2018 2:05pm

rrwrites0

This one is so lovely. Passionate and sweet. Well done! x

Sun, October 28th, 2018 8:52pm

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Thank you, dearest

Mon, November 5th, 2018 6:28am

Rehmat Tanzila

Aww how sweet it is :) So romantic!

Tue, October 30th, 2018 1:46pm

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Thank you, love

Mon, November 5th, 2018 6:27am

NaQeeba Zafar

Wow your words are infused with the vivacious energy of love just like the vibrant streets of New York city. You described the brief moment of sensuality with sheer potency of delicacy and sensitivity.

Fri, January 18th, 2019 3:43pm

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I am honored, friend! I appreciate your very kind words :)

Tue, January 22nd, 2019 6:14am

Sereida

Lovely work, love the choice of words you use for your work.

Fri, January 18th, 2019 9:28pm

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Well, thank you so much, friend! Thank you for taking the time to read my work :) I am humbly honored.

Tue, January 22nd, 2019 6:13am

REFRACTOR

The poem you wrote, the love you brought ;
That won my heart, inspired to write.

Tue, March 5th, 2019 3:51am

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Thank you so much, friend, for taking the time to read my work :)

Tue, March 5th, 2019 5:46am

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