Can I let go and fall into you?
And in your arms breathe you in too?
Can I collapse right on your chest?
Am I overstepping with my request?
Can I just love you obsessively?
Can I just need you this desperately?
I want you for me; I want you for life,
I’ll love you forever even in strife.
I just want to fall in your embrace,
Call you all day and leave you no space.
To trace with my finger around your lips,
And kiss your hand and fingertips.
Crazy about you, (crazy, I know),
Maybe I’m crazy; I can’t let you go.
Submitted: August 23, 2018
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All engulfing passion here, jaylisbeth. Excellent rhyming.
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 2:47pmWe love too hard, Lis. I like the honesty and intensity of your feelings in this poem. The fact that at least through writing we can say what we really want is complete satisfaction. Nice work, sweetheart.
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 2:47pmSuch passion... crazy in love! Great writing, JB.
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 3:50pmBeautiful love.
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 4:31pmWell done, I relate to this one. I love really hard and have periods of borderline obsession with someone, trying to get as close as possible to them and intensify the relationship as fast as possible. Wonderful job Lis
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 6:01pmI don't know, J. B. I'm kind of a wuss--excellent!
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 6:27pmEven though this is romance, I just had to shelf this because this is absolute perfection in passion and lust. You are honest with your words, and the intensity is to the extreme because why wouldn't you say these words? It's a love letter to the works of Shakespeare, because it takes love to another place of poetry, and it's immortalised forever. You should never leave your aura in romance, and don't let anyone tell you that it's repetitive, because it's not; it's fucking beautiful. I'm going to surpass you, and I'm going to write a romantic piece soon. Are you shocked? I have no words left to say, but just beautiful :)
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 7:19pmThe sentiments in this piece are so beautiful, Lis. So many sweet lines and lovely words.
I love it! Spectacular, my friend!
Love can make us crazy at times, and can seem to become an obsession. You captured that very well here. Another wonderful and passionate poem. Loved it.
Fri, August 24th, 2018 4:41amThe rhyming is great! Romantic, romantic, romantic.
Fri, August 24th, 2018 5:21amPero loquisima, dique call you all day and leave no space—MIRA, STALKER, lol, tss! Tranquila!
Fri, October 5th, 2018 12:50amLove the anguish that comes through in this love. I think we have all felt like this at one point!
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Tom Allen714
Well Done Jaylisbeth, like your trying to get as close as you can to the one you love...Tom...
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 2:30pmAuthor
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Why, thank you, Tom :) I have been going through a Romance genre thing lately lol. Thank you for commenting, my good friend.
Thu, August 23rd, 2018 7:32am