The Ocean

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic


It's about a feeling when you swim around in the water.

Submitted: August 29, 2018

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The storm is making the water in the ocean go crazy. I'm swimming around in the cold water while getting pushed back and forth by the big ocean waves. Sometimes I let the waves take me under the freezing water. Letting the water take over my body and I pretend that I can't swim. I love that feeling. The feeling of not being able to do anything and just let the waves take control. The feeling of drowning but still being able to stay alive to safe myself. After a while it feels colder being over water then under. It makes you want to stay under water so you don’t have to feel the cold breeze that’s twirling around in the air. I’m swimming around under the sea like a fish. Sometimes I wish I was a fish. Just swim around in the water while being able to breath. Humans can swim. But not breath. At least not under water. But times like this it feels good not to breath. Just having that feeling of dying but not completely. Being very close to it but not entirely because you’re still alive and you still have control over your own body. The waves are getting bigger and it’s getting harder to control witch way you’re going. Because even if you’re trying to move forward you’re still get pushed back again. But after a lot of struggle you managed to come back up. And when you come up its freezing. You’re shaking all the way to where your towel is laying. And when you finally get there you feel a certain warmth from the towel around you. Witch is weird because the towel isn’t hot it just warms you from the cold experience you’ve just been through. And then you walk home. And everything will go back to the way they were before. And you? You’ll go back to pretending to be okay.


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