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Two Pairs Of Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: The Imaginarium


Written for a 6 sentence challenge from the Imaginarium House.

Submitted: September 04, 2018

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Two Pairs Of Eyes.

His Eyes

There’s warmth there, but more than that, an obvious desire. He wants her so much, wants to be able to make the commitment she is clearly expecting, but there’s wariness too. Maybe he won’t be enough for her; and even more of a worry is that maybe she won’t be enough for him.

Her Eyes

She knows that she loves him, would do anything for him; she can see his desire but is that love, is it enough? She so much wants to love him, to trust him completely, but can she allow herself to when she can see the hesitation in his eyes?


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