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Greatest Night Ever

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Supremacy Writing

Submitted: September 13, 2018

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Submitted: September 13, 2018

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Greatest Night Ever

Hotel room,
Executive style,
I got the best one available,
And made it worthwhile,
You and I, for the night,
Making love for many hours,
Everything was so perfect,
That night was truly ours,
And without a complaint,
We just did what we did,
We just went with the flow,
We just kissed and we kissed,
We just couldn't let go,
It was touch after touch,
When I looked in your eyes,
I just felt so much love,
It was then when I knew,
I just can't be away,
I just knew you're the one,
And my hearts here to stay,
And I'm deeply in love with the style that you have,
The best thing in my life, I have you, I'm so glad,
I can't leave you alone, you just gave me your soul,
You're the best girl ever, that I'm grateful to know,
I can't leave you alone, you just gave me your body,
It's the trust that you have that just touched me and got me,
I can't knock that at all, I respect you so much,
You're the girl that I love, you're the girl that I want...

Written by Sohaaaaail


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