old town

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


a group of teens find an old western town that abandoned but is it(please comment so i know if i need to fix anything for future stories or books)

Submitted: September 18, 2018

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n the western side of america there lies a ton of old towns that were once intubated but now lay abandon and rustic and it is soon brought up by someone to either tear it down or turn it to a museum or something else,but even though there brought teens still explore them even without permission that was the case for 4 teens as they headed to one of the towns in the desert landscape by transportation,IN THE CAR ,”so where exactly we going,”a teen named wade said to the driver,”well wade it's a town giovanni found,”the driver said whose name was  mike,”oh well this be great,”wade said not giving one or two shits about this place,hell he was more like dragged into this,”hey just because i found it does not mean were going to be in any danger,”a teen named giovanni who sat in the passenger side looking back toward wade,”are you sure about that,”wade said with a smirk on his face knowing he now had out done giovanni,”well uh..,”giovanni said trying to think of a time they went exploring and had not be in any danger,”guys calm down were always been in danger but who care it gives us a sweet adelina rush and besides,were in no danger at all this time,”mike said stopping the little argument.a smile soon came over the last person in the car blade had evil thoughts brewing in his head,darker then the next ,”they will soon see,”he said under his breath as the others couldn’t hear it,”were here,”mike said looking back toward the group in the back as he pulled into the small town.the town looked like it belong in some old western film as it had a saloon,a old time bank and couple  others,making two lines as every building was across from each other,”wow what a dump,”wade said as he and the others got out of the vehicle,”how is this a dump it looks great,”mike said simply amazed by it,he always loved the old style of things,”still perfect to explore,”giovanni said looking at one of the old building,”explore you never said we were going to explore,”wade said thinking this was going to be a quick trip,”why yes what you think we were going to do look at the place and leave,”giovanni said sarcastically,”uh kinda of,”wade said in a low voice as he actually thought that,”now that i looked at few of the building let’s get out our gear,”mike said as he went to the back to get the gear as only wade and giovanni followed him back there,”uh mike,”giovanni said relizioning something was wrong,”what giovanni yes i packed sodas,”mike said as he grabbed two backpacks and handed them to wade and giovanni,as they put them on their back,”no mike someone’s missing giovanni said quietly as if someone was listening,”uh who,”mike said confused as he held his bag in his hands,”blade you dumbass,”giovanni said annoyed by the fact that he forgot about him,”oh blade well he does like to wander alone ever since you know what,”mike said as the other two got what he meant,”he is right after his mom died his never been the same,”giovanni said lowering his head feeling bad for him,”yeah but it's very strange to run off like that and not tell us,”wade said starting to get  suspicious of him,”well after the accident with ray i guess it hurt him along with his mother,”giovanni said also starting to get suspicious of him,”well they were good friends,but a enough talking let’s get exploring,now man pick a building and get exploring,”mike said starting off to the building giovanni eyed when they got here,”wait alone,”wade said scared out of his wits to be alone and even at 16 teen he was still scared of it,”well of course wade,you be find what can hurt you,”giovanni said starting to head to his building,” spiders ghost and uh,”wade said listing off what could hurt him out here but soon ran out of things,”come on wade live,”giovanni said turning around for a few seconds and then back around going into the building he picked leaving wade somewhat alone,”oh i guess i’ll head to my building,”wade said to basically nobody as he steady walked to the rusted house stepping up onto the porch stopping to look at the building.he was scared hell frighten even but then again maybe if he did this he could get over his fear.wade then steadily walked up to the door farm seeing that the door was on the right side of it laying there off it's hinges,”well that’s not creepy,”wade said still to no one as he step through the door to what looked to be the livngroom.it was quite empty but not completely as only an old wooden stool was there,”well uh that’s let’s just ignore that,”wade said going into a nearby room which looked to be some old kitchen of sort.all that was in the room was an old cook stove and a wooden table with a broken chair laying underneath,”well guess someone's been here,”wade said looking at the broken chair and turning around going to back to the living room,”well one more the stairs and then were out of here,”wade told himself as he began slowly walking up each step reaching the top of the last step, seeing two doorways,”ok which door,” wade said deciding which door to choose,”ah screw right door,”wade said going to it and stepping through it but a creaking sounded,”uh guess the house is settling,”but oh how wade was wrong  as he then fell through the floor and onto the little wooden stool killing him in a seconds,his lifeless body now laid on the floor with the old wooden stool underneath him,”hello,” giovanni called out as he heard a sound come from another room.he stood still waiting for a responds but not one came,”well guess was imagination,”giovanni said continuing down the hall as he got to the room where the noise was and going into the room,”wow it's empty,’whoa sweet,”giovanni said taking off his backpack and opening the top to find the item he needed,” here it is,”giovanni said pulling out the camera and putting it onto the floor as he began to closed the lid of the backpack but a sound came from upstairs stopping,”oh ghost proof,”giovanni then got up grabbing the camera and slowly walking out of the room and toward the stairs,hearing it again and again,only simling at each one for his whole life he wanted to be the first to get a ghost before mike it was like there little competition or something.he slowly went to the first step land bagan listening to see if the noise was there and it was.he began going up three more steps and stopping to listen if it was their and it was.he began up the finally steps and stopping and listening again but all he received was a hatchet to the face as his body fell down the stairs with a thud.blade step out laughing maniacally dropping the hatchet in his right hand as he started down the stairs to where giovanni body laid lifeless,getting one more look and laughing once again please with his kill.he always did hate giovanni due to what he always called him that stupid dumb name,a roar of a car soon got of his thoughts and looking over toward the hallway that giovanni was in just seconds ago,he then hurried to through the hall,just in time for a shotgun pointed at his chest.the man holding the gun was a chubby man wearing some kind of western get up,”who the hell are you,”the man asked,only receiving a smile from blade,”who the hell are you!,”the man asked again but this time with a strict tone,”i’m blade,”he said as he rushed the man but a shotgun soon sounded ending his life over ever as hisbody then fell onto the wooden poach,”damn it got hide the bodies now,”in a hospital in el paso a women laid in a hospital bed holding a blanket,


A year ago in a forest in texas a truck goes by an old dirt road inside it is blade and his friend ray,”stop the truck here this a good spot,”ray said as blade stop the truck and both got out as ray then went to the back door to grab his gear and blade’s gear as blade was going to the side ray was on,”here blade,”ray said as he threw blade’s bag to him and then grabbed his and put it on his back,”so where we heading,”blade asked as he put his hunting bag on his back,”well i was thinking we go west here to my hunting blind,”ray said starting to walk in the direction of his hunting blind as blade followed him,”so how goods this spot,”blade asked as ray walked in front of him,”well i’ll tell you like this every year this,”ray stopped as he stepped on something holding him in place,”blade help i think i’m stuck in a bear trap,”ray said in a painful tone but blade didn’t do anything he just stood there and laughed maniacally,”what..you.doing,oh god this hurts,”ray said wondering what the hell he was waiting for,but still blade didn’t do anything,he just stood there and laughed as if enjoying this sick show,”ah help now,”ray cried out as blade then started to walk off,”blade where the hell you going,BLADE,”was ray's last words as blade was out of sight and out of earshot.THE END


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