Simply

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Vintage Publishing


My dearest paramour...XoXo


What more can I say;

What more can I do?

It’s really quite simple;

I’m in love with you.

From the smell of your body;

And your tender touch,

It’s really quite simple;

I love you so much.

Your beautiful aura;

Your beautiful soul,

It’s really quite simple;

I just love you whole.

The sound of your voice;

I love when you laugh,

It’s really quite simple;

You’re all that I have.

There’s not much to say;

What else can I do?

It’s really this simple;

I’m so into you.


Submitted: September 21, 2018

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Adam L.

Aw I love "in love Lis" this is beautiful, sweetheart. I hope you're advancing plenty in your novel.

Fri, September 21st, 2018 1:57pm

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Gracias, amigo. I am :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 7:03am

TheSinningCrow

This is absolutely romantic, and absolutely beautiful. Romance can be so simple, because of words like these. Nothing has to be dramatic, it just has to be your feelings, and it just has to be transcended into love. You have written so many romantic pieces, and each one has been a different love letter. Not one has been the same, so continue to write with that romantic touch in your heart. I think I will need to counter this, and write a romantic piece. Would you wait for that? :)
Your poetry has become such an important part of my life, that each time you post something, it becomes the most important part of my day. Lisbeth please keep writing for a long time, because it is your passion, it is your heart, and I want to keep reading it for the rest of my lifetime. Such a romantic and beautiful poem. Well done Saint Lisbeth :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 2:31pm

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Thank you, dear Dexter :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 11:54am

Kemy2U

I am so glad to see your heart peeking above the clouds, finally reaching out to the warmth of the sun. A very nice poem. Have a great weekend as well.

Love and Hugs,
Kemy

Fri, September 21st, 2018 2:54pm

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Thank you, sweet Kemy :)
XoXo!

Fri, September 21st, 2018 11:53am

Sue Harris

Nicely penned, JB. Simply beautiful!

Fri, September 21st, 2018 4:03pm

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Thank you, Sue :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 11:53am

Jeff Bezaire

A beautiful, feel-good piece, my friend. Simply delightful!

Fri, September 21st, 2018 6:17pm

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Aww, thank you, Jeff :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 11:52am

Mike S.

WELL! Excellent poem, J. B!

Fri, September 21st, 2018 7:11pm

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Thank you, Mike :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 2:29pm

hullabaloo22

Jaylisbeth, the sun is shining for you today. Perfect rhythm, perfect rhyme. Excellent work.

Fri, September 21st, 2018 8:02pm

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Thank you, Hully. I am honored that you think so :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 2:28pm

Tom Allen714

A lovely piece Jaylisbeth...Tom...

Fri, September 21st, 2018 9:38pm

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Thank you, Tom:)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 9:16pm

Melancholic Wisdom

Awe, such a sweet and romantic write :) Makes me think about someone people who are really special to me. Great work!

Fri, September 21st, 2018 10:10pm

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Awww, thank you, MW :)

Fri, September 21st, 2018 9:15pm

johngumbs

Driving on a rugged road, then suddenly on a beautifully paved road. Not all roads are beautifully paved, sometimes you have to endure the rough for a while. Life is like that. You need to understand that. This poem is beautiful and shows what is in your heart. I need to read more like that.

Sat, September 22nd, 2018 5:30am

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Why, thank you, John :)

Sat, September 22nd, 2018 7:47pm

Keke Serene

This is so lovely and so sweet, Lis! :) I hope everyone finds a love like this.

Sun, September 23rd, 2018 3:07am

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Thank you, love

Sat, September 22nd, 2018 9:17pm

Angela Villaverde

This is the cutest fucking shit. I’m experiencing some serious cute aggression right now. SO CUTE! I love this! What do people do here when they really love something? Shelf it? Shelvit? Whatever the hell. I’m doing that!

Fri, October 5th, 2018 3:33am

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Ha! Thank you, my love

Mon, October 8th, 2018 2:08pm

Criss Sole

This one made me smile. So sweet. Love doesn'd have to be complicated at all. Great poem Jay.

Sat, November 10th, 2018 10:36am

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Awww, why thank you :)

Wed, November 14th, 2018 6:31am

Norealle Ehab

I have no other words except .. I fell in love with just a few lines :)
~norealle~

Sat, August 10th, 2019 9:51pm

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Awww, well, thank you so much!

Wed, September 11th, 2019 11:58am

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