my errand-ghost sister

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my errand-ghost sister


do you believe in angels?
a question that is open to any possibilities and answers. life itself is so mysterious. there are instances that we can't even expect for it to happen in our lives.
this story revolves around the main character named ana. now, let us discover her mysterious world.
in the middle of the forest, there's a small hut that was surrounded by many beautiful flowers and plants. in that place, the little girl named ana lives. she is just a simple girl that really loves to go out into the woods and look for wild flowers. moreover, she also loved to listen about angel stories from her mother. for her, an angel is like a rainbow that scatters color to her simple life.
one day, ana was walking in the forest to find some wild flowers. suddenly, she heard a distant voice calling her name but she can't figure out where it came from. every corner of the forest embodies a creepy feeling of solitude. immediately, she ran home and asked her mother about the mysterious voice. though, her mother didn’t any distant voice at all. that's why she told her daughter to pray and just ignore it.
the next day, ana went to the forest again. along the way, she met a weak lady. without any hesitation, she helped her and took the lady into her home. she served her with delicious food and water to drink so that she can regain her strength. a few minutes later, she asked the lady where she came from. the lady as confused what to say, as soon as she saw a piece of paper with a marking "rain". she immediately told ana that her name is rain. despite of this, the weird thing is that she pointed towards the sky and told ana that she lived there. ana was anxious about her answer and assumed that she was insane already. consequently, she didn't give much attention to it. starting from that day, their connection was like a rope that tied forever.
together they went to the forest to pick some flowers. beautiful and colorful just like the rainbow up in the sky. they play, water the plants and even do the household chores. while planting in the garden, ana couldn't believe that the seeds she planted yesterday will immediately grow the next day. she asked rain about the phenomena but she only replied her with a sweet smile. amidst the confusion, ana told herself that everything was just a miracle granted by the heaven so that they can improve their way of living.
it's been a year that rain lived with ana and her mother. as a gift, ana took rain out into a scenic view up in the mountain. the place was peaceful that depicts the green plains and high mountain. even the water that flows and falls down the shiny stones was awesome. indeed, the scenery was breathtaking! rain was speechless of its natural beauty. the cold breeze was telling her that every ting was special. that's why rain let ana close her eyes and savor each moment. happiness overflows inside ana's heart. with a flick of a hand, a girl wearing a flowing dress with the colors of the rainbow appeared in front of her. despite its glowing dress, ana can't recognize the face of the girl because a piece of cloth was covering her face.
her sky blue wings spread as if it's protecting ana from any harm. ana was awakened and got startled because rain was not by her side anymore. then, a loud voice was heard echoing on the mountain. ana shouts as loud as she can so that rain can hear it but there's no response at all. her mindset was in trouble already, she ran as fast as the wind blowing furiously.
suddenly, she strip down and find herself hanging on a cliff. holding in a small branch, ana was crying out of fear. for her, it was the end of everything. the branch broke apart and........
a hand reached out for her, it was rain. grabbing her sister to finally keep her safe, all of a sudden rain lose balance and fall into the cliff after she had save ana.
what a misfortune they had! rain died in replace of ana's safety. ana was crying in grief. going home alone, she got depressed. not even knowing that she had left her sandals on the site. day and night, she keeps on blaming herself about the incident.
season changed and year had pass, yet ana can't still forgive herself. the place was the same and the wound in her heart was still fresh. she knelt down in front of the sunset and tears were keeps on falling from her innocent eyes. out from her falling tears, a pretty flower grew.
a sweet voice was heard, "why are you sending tears? your sister didn't left you. why don't you close your eyes and feel her presence? "
right after that, she closed her eyes and felt the warm hands caressing her rosy cheeks that wipe her tears away. as ana awakened, rain was there. she wore a rainbow-like dress which matches with her sky blue wings.
ana asked, "rain, where have you been? why did you left us? i waited for you. "
rain replied, "i didn't left either ana. i was by your side yet you can't see me with your naked eyes. from the beginning, i am with you always. now, why are you crying? do you believe on things only when you can see it? just like the wind, can you see it? ‘’
ana shyly replied, "no, i can't see it. though, i can feel it. that's why i know it really exists. "
rain explained, "that's the spirit of faith ana. not everything you can see in this world remains forever. even they'll left, the memories you have with them becomes your treasure. by this way, you can learn how to understand the magic of life. you may not see me but you can assure i'm always near. just like the way you remember our memories together. be happy and take good care of mother. always be thankful for the blessings that god gave to you. can you promise me that ana? ‘’
with eagerness, ana replied, "yes rain, sorry if i forgot all the things that you have taught me.”
rain replied, “there’s no need for you to be sorry. we must be thankful with each other. thank you for letting me experienced what's the feeling to be a contented mortal. for making me smile when i frown and help me solve my concerns. indeed, you proved to me that you have a beautiful heart. i hope you won't change that and continue to be kind to those who are weak. by the way, i think this pair of sandals belongs to you. "
ana accepted the sandals and was asked by rain to close her eyes again. rain let her see the past. all those memories they had came rushing in. with a flashback, everything was clear now.
first, the voice she heard in the middle of the forest was a warning for ana because a dangerous event will happen. second, rain was the one responsible for the fast-growing of the plants. third, the mysterious lady was rain.
finally, rain bud her adieu to ana saying, “goodbye my sweet sister, be good and just think happy thoughts.”
ana witnessed rain as she ascended. her smile was free from hurt anymore. acceptance and new beginning now governs ana's heart and mind. as life goes on, ana grew morally upright and kind towards other people. without knowing, rain was her destined angel forever. right at this moment, ana wanted to tell you that,
"when someone you love becomes a memory. that memory becomes a treasure forever. "


- the end -

Submitted: October 07, 2018

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My Errand-Ghost Sister

 

 

Do you believe in angels?

A question that is open to any possibilities and answers. Life itself is so mysterious. There are instances that we can't even expect for it to happen in our lives.

This story revolves around the main character named Ana. Now, let us discover her mysterious world.

In the middle of the forest, there's a small hut that was surrounded by many beautiful flowers and plants. In that place, the little girl named Ana lives. She is just a simple girl that really loves to go out into the woods and look for wild flowers. Moreover, she also loved to listen about angel stories from her mother. For her, an angel is like a rainbow that scatters color to her simple life.

One day, Ana was walking in the forest to find some wild flowers. Suddenly, she heard a distant voice calling her name but she can't figure out where it came from. Every corner of the forest embodies a creepy feeling of solitude. Immediately, she ran home and asked her mother about the mysterious voice. Though, her mother didn’t any distant voice at all. That's why she told her daughter to pray and just ignore it.

The next day, Ana went to the forest again. Along the way, she met a weak lady. Without any hesitation, she helped her and took the lady into her home. She served her with delicious food and water to drink so that she can regain her strength. A few minutes later, she asked the lady where she came from. The lady as confused what to say, as soon as she saw a piece of paper with a marking "Rain". She immediately told Ana that her name is Rain. Despite of this, the weird thing is that she pointed towards the sky and told Ana that she lived there. Ana was anxious about her answer and assumed that she was insane already. Consequently, she didn't give much attention to it. Starting from that day, their connection was like a rope that tied forever.

Together they went to the forest to pick some flowers. Beautiful and colorful just like the rainbow up in the sky. They play, water the plants and even do the household chores. While planting in the garden, Ana couldn't believe that the seeds she planted yesterday will immediately grow the next day. She asked Rain about the phenomena but she only replied her with a sweet smile. Amidst the confusion, Ana told herself that everything was just a miracle granted by the heaven so that they can improve their way of living.

It's been a year that Rain lived with Ana and her mother. As a gift, Ana took Rain out into a scenic view up in the mountain. The place was peaceful that depicts the green plains and high mountain. Even the water that flows and falls down the shiny stones was awesome. Indeed, the scenery was breathtaking!  Rain was speechless of its natural beauty. The cold breeze was telling her that every ting was special. That's why Rain let Ana close her eyes and savor each moment. Happiness overflows inside Ana's heart. With a flick of a hand, a girl wearing a flowing dress with the colors of the rainbow appeared in front of her. Despite its glowing dress, Ana can't recognize the face of the girl because a piece of cloth was covering her face.

Her sky blue wings spread as if it's protecting Ana from any harm. Ana was awakened and got startled because Rain was not by her side anymore. Then, a loud voice was heard echoing on the mountain. Ana shouts as loud as she can so that Rain can hear it but there's no response at all. Her mindset was in trouble already, she ran as fast as the wind blowing furiously.

Suddenly, she strip down and find herself hanging on a cliff. Holding in a small branch, Ana was crying out of fear. For her, it was the end of everything. The branch broke apart and........

A hand reached out for her, it was Rain. Grabbing her sister to finally keep her safe, all of a sudden Rain lose balance and fall into the cliff after  she had save Ana.

What a misfortune they had! Rain died in replace of Ana's safety. Ana was crying in grief. Going home alone, she got depressed. Not even knowing that she had left her sandals on the site. Day and night, she keeps on blaming herself about the incident.

Season changed and year had pass, yet Ana can't still forgive herself. The place was the same and the wound in her heart was still fresh. She knelt down in front of the sunset and tears were keeps on falling from her innocent eyes. Out from her falling tears, a pretty flower grew.

A sweet voice was heard, "Why are you sending tears? Your sister didn't left you. Why don't you close your eyes and feel her presence? "

Right after that, she closed her eyes and felt the warm hands caressing her rosy cheeks that wipe her tears away. As Ana awakened, Rain was there. She wore a rainbow-like dress which matches with her sky blue wings.

Ana asked, "Rain, where have you been? Why did you left us? I waited for you. "

Rain replied, "I didn't left either Ana. I was by your side yet you can't see me with your naked eyes. From the beginning, I am with you always. Now, why are you crying? Do you believe on things only when you can see it? Just like the wind, can you see it? ‘’

Ana shyly replied, "No, I can't see it. Though, I can feel it. That's why I know it really exists. "

Rain explained, "That's the spirit of faith Ana. Not everything you can see in this world remains forever. Even they'll left, the memories you have with them becomes your treasure. By this way, you can learn how to understand the magic of life. You may not see me but you can assure I'm always near. Just like the way you remember our memories together. Be happy and take good care of mother. Always be thankful for the blessings that God gave to you. Can you promise me that Ana? ‘’

With eagerness, Ana replied, "Yes Rain, sorry if I forgot all the things that you have taught me.”

Rain replied, “There’s no need for you to be sorry. We must be thankful with each other. Thank you for letting me experienced what's the feeling to be a contented mortal. For making me smile when I frown and help me solve my concerns. Indeed, you proved to me that you have a beautiful heart. I hope you won't change that and continue to be kind to those who are weak. By the way, I think this pair of sandals belongs to you. "

Ana accepted the sandals and was asked by Rain to close her eyes again. Rain let her see the past. All those memories they had came rushing in. With a flashback, everything was clear now.

First, the voice she heard in the middle of the forest was a warning for Ana because a dangerous event will happen. Second, Rain was the one responsible for the fast-growing of the plants. Third, the mysterious lady was Rain.

Finally, Rain bud her adieu to Ana saying, “Goodbye my sweet sister, be good and just think happy thoughts.”

Ana witnessed Rain as she ascended. Her smile was free from hurt anymore. Acceptance and new beginning now governs Ana's heart and mind. As life goes on, Ana grew morally upright and kind towards other people. Without knowing, Rain was her destined angel forever. Right at this moment, Ana wanted to tell you that,

"When someone you love becomes a memory. That memory becomes a treasure forever. "

 

 

- THE END -

 


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