Moonstruck

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Romance

Getting lost towards you was the best adventure I ever had.
Love you, Ben.
An Astronomical Acrostic Love Poem

Bright shooting stars align with our love
Embedded as clusters around the universe
Numerous asteroids trying to break us apart
Just as I was heading towards earth;
blackhole tried to suck me in, I turned back
Man, now where do I go from here?
 I am lost in my own galaxy, away from home
Nowhere to turn, but to the man in the moon


Submitted: October 09, 2018

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Keke Serene

A beautiful poem about space and love! :D

Tue, October 9th, 2018 3:27am

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Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment!

Mon, October 8th, 2018 9:05pm

Melancholic Wisdom

Rarely do I see acrostic poems on here, and this one was wonderful. I especially enjoyed how you combined space and love together, the imagery was beautiful. Well done!

Tue, October 9th, 2018 4:03am

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Thank you so much for your kind review!

Mon, October 8th, 2018 9:04pm

hullabaloo22

A whole galaxy of emotions in this well-written piece. Well done!

Tue, October 9th, 2018 7:07pm

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Thank you kindly!

Sat, October 13th, 2018 5:04am

Stormbird Throneshaker

"And the spirit fills the darkness of the heavens. It fills

Thu, October 18th, 2018 2:12am

Stormbird Throneshaker

"And the spirit fills the darkness of the heavens. It fills the endless yearning of the soul. It lives within a star to far to dream of. It lives within each part and is the whole. It's the fire and the wings that fly us home. - - - John Denver "The Fire And The Wings That Fly Us Home" A beautiful song if you haven't heard it, look it up on youtube and give it a listen. It compliments your poem quite well.

Thu, October 18th, 2018 2:17am

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