Haiku

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

I sometimes like to write a haiku. They are so simple.

Haikus are simple
Poems that show emotions 
I love them that way


Submitted: October 09, 2018

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Keke Serene

Check your syllables on line two. I got six.

Tue, October 9th, 2018 3:27pm

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Hai-kus are sim-ple 5
Po-ems that show e-mo-tions 7
I love them that way 5

A total of seventeen syllables
I but this in several checker and it confirmed it is a haiku.
You can correct me if I’m wrong. I don’t mind the criticism.

Tue, October 9th, 2018 12:21pm

Keke Serene

I've never heard poems pronounced as two syllables- though I can see how it would be.
Good work! :p I love a good haiku!

Tue, October 9th, 2018 7:27pm

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I guess it not really used in haikus. I appreciate the feedback though.

Tue, October 9th, 2018 1:30pm

kelly perkins

I like your haiku
I can't think of anything
This is getting weird

Thu, November 22nd, 2018 11:57am

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