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Flight Of Horizons: Illusion of Home

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is the first book of a Series I have written. Please let me know your thoughts.

It has been almost two decades since the President of The Great Regime walked calmly into the spotlight. The peace talks between the planets three largest factions, who had been at war for a decade, began to crumble for the third time. At first, the Regime became the glue that held the three major world powers together but soon President Scott had coaxed each of the factions to become part of The Great Regime, leaving him in full control of two-thirds of the worlds' population and armies.

As The Great Regimes' true intentions became obvious the smaller nations banded together, preventing President Scott to take full control, each country within the smaller dominion began creating teams to fight and break the regime' grip. One such team cross paths with two females, that the planets ever more oppressive governing regime are hunting. Taking the duo under their protection the group has to evade capture as they travel across the continent to deliver the marked females to a safe haven, slowly learning to trust and rely on each other.
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Table of Contents

One

Submitted: November 02, 2018

Sustel was a quiet, rustic styled town; it was enclosed by its three storey high fort walls and moat. The focal point was t... Read Chapter

Two

Submitted: November 03, 2018

   "Get back here!" a voice demanded out of the darkness, Lucy dug her heels in and ran harder, half a dozen or more Great... Read Chapter

Three

Submitted: November 04, 2018

Lillian' tired footsteps echoed in the emptiness of the apartment blocks foyer. Safety was a priority now - the halls would b... Read Chapter

Four

Submitted: November 04, 2018

Christen parked the car next to a large grey truck in front of a small hut, it looked like an abandoned building. He and the fou... Read Chapter

Five

Submitted: November 04, 2018

  "No way, this is a pit stop?" Damien exclaimed making Lillian wake in fright. Christen turned around to glar... Read Chapter

Six

Submitted: November 04, 2018

Lillian was curled up on the girls' right holding her hand as they slept, Christen speculated whether Lillian was afraid t... Read Chapter

Seven

Submitted: November 04, 2018

Once Tyler and Christen had agreed that the wounds on Hope were stable enough, they planned the move to a new safe house, bringi... Read Chapter

Eight

Submitted: November 04, 2018

The group have been together for over a month and a half, they had moved from one safe house to another every week to ten days a... Read Chapter

Nine

Submitted: November 05, 2018

The small group had been in the manor house for coming up to two weeks, and Hope was eager to get going, but the aerialists... Read Chapter

Ten

Submitted: November 05, 2018

"How much further is the house?" Hope asked, almost tripping over another root. Tyler glanced behind him; helping her keep balan... Read Chapter

Eleven

Submitted: November 05, 2018

Dawn soon followed, the fire was dying, but Hope concluded it was probably best to let it. The nocturnal creatures had gon... Read Chapter

Twelve

Submitted: November 06, 2018

The two strolled along the boulevard towards the hotel. Hope enjoyed watching the artists and shows; especially an act with a pe... Read Chapter

Thirteen

Submitted: November 06, 2018

Unable to remain asleep Tyler had decided to go for a run, the sun had just begun to rise when he had first set out, it was now ... Read Chapter

Fourteen

Submitted: November 06, 2018

"What's going on with you?" Damien demanded, standing in front of his unruly haired leader. They had just got in through the fro... Read Chapter

Fifteen

Submitted: November 06, 2018

Christen and Hope stood together to one side, in the Rose Hotel lobby, watching guests and staff go about their business. Trevor... Read Chapter

Sixteen

Submitted: November 07, 2018

"The stylist is coming at six to do your hair nails and makeup. I will be dropping you off for a quarter to eight as the dinner is going ... Read Chapter

Seventeen

Submitted: November 08, 2018

 He was dressed in a stylish tuxedo and polished black shoes. His hair was still a slightly more tamed mess of brown l... Read Chapter

Eighteen

Submitted: November 07, 2018

Two vigilant figures were concealed in the shadows of a clump of trees, they had been surveying the base for a few hours, it was almost t... Read Chapter

Nineteen

Submitted: November 08, 2018

Lillian woke, immediately she knew she was somewhere else. the room smelt less clinical, the bedding was softer and the shape of the room... Read Chapter

Twenty

Submitted: November 08, 2018

'It is strange to wish to be proven wrong', the Auburn teen considered glumly as she sat listening to her newest playlist while orga... Read Chapter

Twenty-One

Submitted: November 08, 2018

.Hope sat in one of the many service stations dotted along her journey back to her birth-home. It was after five thirty and... Read Chapter