Anna

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
Anna. She was a sweet girl. She didn't deserve such a horrifying end.

Submitted: November 06, 2018

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Anna. She was a sweet girl. She didn't derserve to die such a painful and horrifying death.
How it all went down. Anna was out in her treehouse that her dad built for her before he passed away, she loved playing there afterschool. So when she was in her pretend tea party, her mum called out to her "Anna, time for you're warm bath before bed". Being the disclipined girl her mum raised her to be, she immediately climbed down the ladder and went inside her house.

 In the bathroom, she reached for the polished maroon tap for the bath, but all of a sudden she felt a chill travel down her spine as she heard "SSSssssss". "It's just you're imagination" she lied to herself. She almost expected something strange to happen when she turned on the tap but to her suprise nothing happed. "phew" she thought to herself. Everything went on normally up until she layed back. The drain started to cough up black liquid, turning the water merky. Anna immediately shot up. Following the merky water was the same voice but this time, Anna knew it wasn't her imagination. What the voice said was straight up horrifying for her. "ANnnaaaaaa" the voice was faint and straight up chilling. Oh sorry did I forget to mention that Anna was screaming the whole time. Her paniced mother run up the stairs into the bath to see her only child, submerged in black water. Her mother immediately pulled her out. Anna was awake but paralysed.

It took a few slaps to bring Anna back. "Mmummm wha-what was th-that" Anna said shakenly. "Oh honey, it was just a issue with the pipes. Don't worry, the plumber who set the up will definetly pay the price" the mother reassured her shivering daughter. As Anna was trying to sleep, she finally felt sure that it was a pipes issue. But then she froze. "But who said my name..."

BBC NEWS " A nine year old girl named Anna Castell was found dead earlier today by her mother. The girl had doctors puzzled as she had her mouth, ears and nose clogged up with this black liquid"...

BY OMAR EL KHATAB


© Copyright 2020 Omar El Khatab. All rights reserved.

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