Disloyal

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
Disloyalty bought him a horrible end.

Submitted: November 10, 2018

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UNLOYAL

Rose. She was a sweet girl. Too bad she killed herself.

'We can't be together anymore' said the dad.
'Max, I know you've been seeing someone else !' exclaimed the mother
'Charlotte, it's not what it looks like.' Replied the Max.
'GET OUT OF MY FACE, WE WILL TALK ABOUT THIS AFTER ROSE SLEEPS!' exclaimed the raging mother.
Since the mother had her first suspicions about her unloyal husband, Charlotte began to call her husband by his name. Replacing 'honey' and 'my love'. 
They thought rose was taking a bath in the one bathroom they shared. But she was actually in the narrow corridor that led up to the kitchen, where her parent's argument was taking place.
She approached the kitchen but accidentally stepped on a rubber duck and it made a squeak.
'Rose?' said the father.
Anna ran back across the corridor and into the bathroom, took off her robe. And jumped into the ready bath, spilt water over the bath. 
Her father popped his head in. Half covering his eyes and giggling.
'Dad stop peeking!!' She laughed.
'How's my favourite daughter doing' he said
'Dad, I'm your only daughter' she replied.
They both started laughing.
The father left the bathroom and approached the kitchen. It was completely silent. He slowed down until he heard metal scraping. 
'Charlotte?'
No reply 
He sets foot on the kitchen floor
And turns around to see Charlotte. With a knife. Aimed at his chest
That was the last thing he ever saw...


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