The sad man

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Hey guy.I am not as satisfied with this poem compared too most of my other poems.I wrote this poem out a family member of mine.Who is a generally lovely person and is very closer too me but he is a alcoholic Once again apologies of any spelling errors and please feel free too give me feedback.
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The sad man desires money as much as he acquires shelter.

His amount of cheer depends on his amount of beer.

His mother spends her days in tears and fear for his wealth and ill health.

She tends too spend time worring about his crime and how he spends his time.


Submitted: December 17, 2018

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Harrison Wild

I like it Sarah! A nice little snippet of a worried life, sometimes I find short poems can be much easier to digest and can be much more satisfying that a trawl of lines!

Mon, December 17th, 2018 2:38pm

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