under the water

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
what’s under your pool waters?

Submitted: December 28, 2018

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Submitted: December 28, 2018

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It was a hot summer day when me and my family wanted to go to the new outdoor pool that just opened up down the street , we all agreed it was a good idea, I packed my things then I started walking to the pool, it was very close by are home so it was easy to get to. When I got there I checked if the pool was packed because I never liked swimming in packed pools, surprisingly it wasn’t, I then became confused cause it was the weekend and everyone was raving over coming here this weekend… there wasn’t even a lifeguard, I then checked if the door to get into the pool was open, it wasn’t. “I guess I got the date wrong” I thought, I then got a call from my mom telling me that the pool was closed for the rest of the month, “Oh ok I’m coming home” I said, I started walking home when I heard a creak behind me, I turned around and to my surprise the door to the pool and changing rooms was open, I walked towards it and opened it more, I looked over my shoulder to check if anyone was around, no one was…. I was really hot so I thought it was a good idea to just get ready and go for a quick swim to cool down, before I went I called my mom and told her I was stopping at the store to pick up some drinks. I got ready and hoped into the pool. I walked in the water for a little so I could get used to it, when I did get used to it I went to the deepest part of the pool, I then swam to the bottom of the pool, maybe there was cool things at the bottom since nobody came here yet, so I opened my eyes what I saw wasn’t what I thought I would see…. It was a dead body getting eaten by this mermaid fish human thing I screamed as I seen this, I think it heard me because it started chasing after me! I swam for my life, I was so scared… I felt something grab my leg it started pulling me down I was losing my conciseness but I still didn’t want to die, so with the strength I had left I pushed the thing off of me then swam to the stairs… I fell to the floor when I got out of the pool I needed to catch my breath. When I did I went to look for the thing or the dead body but…. It was gone, I didn’t think to hard about it I just wanted to leave, I got ready quick and ran home, I never told anyone about this because I didn’t want to get into trouble, I’m still so confused I want answers. the only thing I know is why they closed the pool for the month and I think you know why two.


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