Thunder War

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
A man tells of his feelings as he goes to battle and how he quite nearly died.

Submitted: December 29, 2018

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Submitted: December 29, 2018



The time draws near,

The battle awaits,

The air is filled,

With anticipation!


I hear the thunder,

I feel the rumble,

Or perhaps it is,

But the beating of my heart?


Adrenaline rush,

Excitement rise,

The cheers are like roars of lions,

But can I do it?


I clench my fists,

I grit my teeth,

I stomp my foot,

And in I charge!


There is no stopping,

No pause or break,

This is real,

This is now!


I meet my foe,

One of equal or greater strength,

I cry out,

"This is war!"


All is lost,

I fight all I can,

The crowd cheers,

I am weak...


The end is coming,

I feel it within,

I do not stop,

I cannot stop!


I feel it within me,

The crazy rage inside,

Perhaps it was all foolish,

But it is too late...


I fall upon the rocky ground,

And my foe halts,

I feel him there,

He watches me!


Where did my strength go?

When I so greatly needed it?

My foe extends a hand for mine,



I stand,

My foe,

My friend,

My life is spared!


The crowd,

They boo!

They have no compassion!

My friend leads me to safety.


To new places,

With my friend,

I am safe,

He healed me.

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