Yellow Roses

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Yellow Roses

Yellow Roses

Those are stunning roses you carry.

I wonder who gave them to you. I am curios, can you tell me?

The Yellow colored roses compliment your big, beautiful eyes.

They look of great quality. Must be expensive. Look at their size.

Yellow roses represent hope, I am sure you know.

Same ones you held at our wedding, when we decided to elope.

I seen you from far, as you walked my way.

You couldn’t be incognito; the bouquet gave you away.

Must be a special occasion, with your magnificent dress.

Can I ask why you cry? Why do you look so stressed?

The sun is shinning so bright, yet I am still so cold.

Please, stop being sad. You used to be so bold.

Can’t you be happy, with an arrangement so grand?

What are you doing? Get up and off of that sand.

I love you too darling, but must you talk this way?

Stop kneeling on the ground and hugging that grave.

My frustration is growing, can’t you hear?

Get off that dammed grave and wipe your tears!

I suddenly realize, I need to open my eyes and see 

Through the concrete, those roses are for me.

Temoc Sol

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Submitted: January 08, 2019

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jmm424

Wow! Excellent work.

Tue, January 8th, 2019 4:16pm

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Thank you! I appreciate you commenting on my poem and taking the time to read it.

Tue, January 8th, 2019 8:33am

hullabaloo22

A haunting read, temoc, in more ways than one. The sighting, misunderstanding, confusion and realization of a ghost.

Tue, January 8th, 2019 8:38pm

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Your input is always second to none. Thank you. Really! Thank you.

Tue, January 8th, 2019 12:49pm

The Small Bear

My gosh this is amazing!

Fri, January 11th, 2019 1:01pm

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Thank you ! That means a lot! I appreciate the time you took to read my work.

Fri, January 11th, 2019 7:32am

Buck Della

Woow!
Nicest poem ive read on booksie so fare !!

Sat, January 19th, 2019 2:42pm

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Thank you so much for reading my poem and leaving such a nice comment.

Sat, January 19th, 2019 9:29am

Derina Penn

A really excellent write!!! Very impressive at the end!

Thu, May 16th, 2019 7:13pm

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Big thank you! Derina Penn

Sat, June 1st, 2019 10:03pm

North Woodwax

Beautiful poem, and such talent. Wonderful job :)

Fri, May 17th, 2019 11:15pm

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Thank you. I greatly appreciate the comment.

Sat, June 1st, 2019 10:02pm

Mr. Random

Too many questions to answer. Loved it.

Sat, May 18th, 2019 4:44am

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Thank you. I really appreciate the comment. Im glad you liked the poem.

Sat, June 1st, 2019 10:01pm

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Sun, October 6th, 2019 5:39pm

poetcheel

Applause to this magnificent poem!

Sun, October 6th, 2019 5:40pm

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