Featured Review on this writing by Nicks The Logophile
"Read your book from chapter 1 to 10. The book is full of eccentricities like reflections, fantastic beings, and mirrors. I like the elvish girl/woman. The elve appears to be the actual reflection of the main character's personality. In my opinion the elvish self was maltreated and disregarded by the society or the people around her. She became humaniod after being mishandled by the society. The Yellow-purple flowers and the singing are the reminder of the main character's innocent childhood and the girl wearing the yellow-purple dress is giving main character a nude to see the beauty of life and to put the darkness away. Overall the story is set in a dreamy realm and by the end of novel the character wakes up to face the real harsh word but now she should be seeing the world from a new perspective. The sentences are simple and easy to understand. The main idea of the novel is clear and powerful. Great work! "
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Recent Comments
Terrific imagery and some great sensory descriptions! I love the idea of walking through a thick fog, though one that smells like eggs and is leading me somewhere unfamiliar doesn't appeal to me. But I love the imagery and the mood it casts. Great work, Hully!
Very atmospheric and menacing. A great opening chapter, Hully, one which drew me in.
What a beginning. I've never been fond of fog myself, but this fog seems to be alive in the worst way, lol.
Beautiful descriptions and well paced.
I was starting to feel a little tight chested myself.
Great Chapter!
There is something quite appealing about this, already I'm taken in. Looking forward to the rest
A transporting fog perhaps? I'll have to read on to find out! A figured it was a symptom of pollution but perhaps something more or less sinister...
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