Disclaimer: Well, I'm still here, aren't I??? haha

Poof! Gone.

In my darkest hours I
Dream of ways to die
Without the messy trappings
Of heart-wrenching goodbyes
To disappear like magic
With a blink of my eye.


Submitted: February 09, 2019

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AdamCarlton

Interesting. One step to freedom? Or, they just unilaterally severed all their relationships?

Just trying to juggle the pros and cons.

Sat, February 9th, 2019 10:19pm

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Sometimes the only con is the pain one would leave behind. Pretty big con for people with good families. Thanks for commenting, Adam.

Sat, February 9th, 2019 7:35pm

Mike S.

I'd change dreams, Bobi--but excellent none-the-less!

Sat, February 9th, 2019 10:35pm

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The dream is not as grim as you think... Thanks, Mike.

Sat, February 9th, 2019 7:36pm

Jeff Bezaire

Honestly, the goodbyes are the reason I never followed through with any of my plans; I'd want to leave letters behind for those closest to me to let them know it wasn't their fault, and for them to keep living their life as best they can. That always stopped me from giving in. Goodbyes can be so difficult and sometimes that's a good thing.
So much said in a few lines. Well written!

Sun, February 10th, 2019 1:23am

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Exactly what I meant! Thanks, Jeff.

Sat, February 9th, 2019 7:37pm

tom mcmullen

Good to see you're in a happy mood Bobi, I have this fear that if I knock myself off I'll just come back!

Sun, February 10th, 2019 4:40am

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Thanks, Tom! Yes, you might be like the cat...

Sat, February 9th, 2019 8:45pm

hullabaloo22

Frequently all too relatable, Bobi.

Sun, February 10th, 2019 8:31pm

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Yup. Thanks, Hully!

Sun, February 10th, 2019 12:46pm

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