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Awww, that was so sweet. I loved the idea of drawing each other to express their love for each other. It was a gorgeous poem.
Wed, March 11th, 2020 10:39pm This is short and sweet and full of art! I love your style of writing it and how kept it simple but meaningful. Just like art, love is also full of expression and you have showcased it very good here, however, Though not need, i would recommend you using some commas to add a pausing build up for the next line.
Overall, the poem is very meaningful and expressive with a very deeper meaning that what is on the surface. For we can both draw each other literally on a paper or by the pulling of our emotions for each other.
Fantastic !
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Aw, this is such a sweet poem!
Fri, February 15th, 2019 2:38amGreat job!!
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy the poem.
Thu, February 14th, 2019 7:56pm