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Rhiannon Takes A Trip

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
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Making An Escape

Submitted: February 28, 2019

1. Making An Escape   It was a nice day, a sunny day; one that was just too good to waste away by staying indoors. The bir... Read Chapter

A Slab Of Rock

Submitted: February 28, 2019

2. A Slab Of Rock Rhiannon was still dripping and squelching when the slab of rock finally came in to view. She could not think of ... Read Chapter

An Intoxicating Kiss

Submitted: March 01, 2019

3. An Intoxicating Kiss Rhiannon opened her eyes and her mind just enough to see that it was a cat that had come from...somewhere. It... Read Chapter


Submitted: March 02, 2019

4. Descent Rhiannon felt it, the invasion to her breath. If she’d have been awake she would have quite simply have coughed it out, ... Read Chapter

Just Breathe

Submitted: March 03, 2019

5. Just Breathe. “You can do it, you know.” The words, whispered in to her ear, slowly made their way to Rhiannon’s brain, ... Read Chapter

Finnun Furr

Submitted: March 04, 2019

6. Finnun Furr “Grab hold,” he shouted, sending his tail drifting across the water towards the floundering Rhiannon. “I...I... Read Chapter

Far From Wonderful

Submitted: March 06, 2019

7. Far From Wonderful Even though Finnun Furr was a large cat, there was no getting away from the fact that he was much smaller tha... Read Chapter

But Why?

Submitted: March 07, 2019

8. But Why? Girl and cat sat quietly for a while. Rhiannon was lost in her own thoughts while Finnun Furr was thinking about food a... Read Chapter

Black-And-White And Grey

Submitted: March 08, 2019

9. Black-And-White And Grey “Get yourself comfortable, Rhia,” said Finnun Furr, with not a trace of a meow or even a purr. “T... Read Chapter

The Quest

Submitted: March 09, 2019

10. The Quest “Can you really not see what I have brought you for? You are to bring peace to Unwonderland, to unite the warring r... Read Chapter

Beautiful Butterflies

Submitted: March 10, 2019

11. Beautiful Butterflies The sky was a dark blue, almost black. Rhiannon was quite surprised how much she could still see. It was ... Read Chapter

Mad Hair!

Submitted: March 10, 2019

12. Mad Hair! As they flittered and fluttered, so close that she could feel their wing movements, Rhiannon found herself torn in two.... Read Chapter

A Palace In The Light Of Night

Submitted: March 12, 2019

13. A Palace In The Light Of Night Mad Hair might have been young but he was surprisingly strong. Steady and sure-footed too, as he... Read Chapter

An Open Door

Submitted: March 13, 2019

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With A Leap And A Bound

Submitted: March 13, 2019

15. With A Leap And A Bound Rhiannon followed the cat through a maze of corridors until they came to what she could only imagine wa... Read Chapter

"I Feel Just Like I'm Being Watched."

Submitted: March 14, 2019

16. “I Feel Just Like I’m Being Watched.” “But he does not want to move,” Rhiannon said to the cat that was already startin... Read Chapter

Pretty Can Be Poison

Submitted: March 16, 2019

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"Don't Linger!"

Submitted: March 16, 2019

18. “Don’t Linger!” The scenery was definitely becoming more lush and beautiful. At times the very air that they walked through... Read Chapter

In Mists Of Grey

Submitted: March 17, 2019

19. In Mists Of Grey How different the world became once they left the enchanted lands. The lush vegetation, the spectacular colors a... Read Chapter

The Queen Of Grey

Submitted: March 17, 2019

20. The Queen Of Grey Once again, Rhiannon found herself surprised by how quickly they arrived at the Palace doorway. In all honest... Read Chapter

Time Is Ticking

Submitted: March 20, 2019

21. Time Is Ticking “What was that noise?” Rhiannon asked as they began to walk away from the castle. “What noise? The cl... Read Chapter


Submitted: March 20, 2019

  22. Goggles Rhiannon knew the tall building was their destination as soon as it came in to view. It looked like a cross be... Read Chapter

Monster Fish

Submitted: March 22, 2019

23. Monster Fish “So where do we go from here?” Rhiannon gasped out her question as she tried to keep up with the cat’s rapid... Read Chapter

Where Seahorses Kiss

Submitted: March 23, 2019

  24. Where Seahorses Kiss. “Don’t shut your eyes,” shouted Finnun Furr from his much safer position. It was all rig... Read Chapter

The Pearl

Submitted: March 23, 2019

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"What Do You See?"

Submitted: March 24, 2019

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Fee Fi Fo

Submitted: March 26, 2019

27. Fee Fi Fo “Ice?” asked Finnun Furr. “Yes, ice. But that’s it. I can’t see anything more.” Rhiannon snapped open ... Read Chapter

Fiddle Dee

Submitted: March 26, 2019

28. Fiddle Dee. The dim light of day began to fade even more as Rhiannon found herself tumbling down and down. Her elbow struck rock,... Read Chapter

"What Does It Look Like?"

Submitted: March 29, 2019

29. “What Does It Look Like?” Rhiannon was struck dumb. The dwarf might be short but he looked powerful enough without the pick... Read Chapter

Not A Moment To Lose

Submitted: March 29, 2019

30. Not A Moment To Lose Rhiannon gasped, and that caught the cat’s attention. He looked in the direction that she pointed and no... Read Chapter

"Don't Stir The Imagination!"

Submitted: March 31, 2019

31. “Don’t Stir The Imagination!” “We’ve got no time to lose, Rhia, for look, the sky is already beginning to lighten. Th... Read Chapter


Submitted: April 01, 2019

32. Beware! Rhiannon caught up to the cat once more. “Finn, I think one of them has woken!” “Where?” Finnun Furr came t... Read Chapter

Looking For A Prince

Submitted: April 02, 2019

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It's Got To Be Stainless

Submitted: April 03, 2019

34. It’s Got To Be Stainless The sound of metal hitting metal silenced the three of them. They all turned to look in the directio... Read Chapter

Seeing Black And White

Submitted: April 04, 2019

35. Seeing Black And White The grey horse, with man, girl and cat on his back seemed to be moving at a remarkable speed without hav... Read Chapter

By Royal Command

Submitted: April 05, 2019

36. By Royal Command Rhiannon had always thought of zebra as being swift over short distances, but had never given much considerati... Read Chapter


Submitted: April 05, 2019

37. A Betrothal A pair of arms grabbed her and held her in a vice-like grip. The other Harlequin, face hidden behind a black and wh... Read Chapter

Some Kind Of Hero

Submitted: April 05, 2019

38. Some Kind Of Hero The Palace that just a short time ago had seemed almost deserted was now positively bustling. The Harlequins ... Read Chapter

As It Began

Submitted: April 05, 2019

39. As It Began. She was wet, soggy. She must have fallen asleep and rolled down the bank, Rhiannon thought. At least it was still su... Read Chapter

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