Note to Self

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


Note to Self

 

You feel as though

You can’t go on

Your fists are clenched

Your guns are drawn

Your self-esteem

Is all but gone

and you can’t take

Another con

 

This tired world

Can be so cold

But love’s around

It’s been paroled

Just turn yourself

From doom foretold

Pick up your heart

And crack the mould

 

Look deep inside

Your soul to find

The person that

You left behind

Renew yourself

Refresh your mind

To enmity

Be not resigned

 

Don’t let this world

Extinguish you

Lift up your head

And see it through

You’re stronger than

You ever knew

And it’s your turn

Don’t miss your cue


Submitted: March 07, 2019

© Copyright 2020 Bobi Leutschaft Poitras. All rights reserved.

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whijan

ummm ….I love this, the shift was so beautifully done, very well written.

Thu, March 7th, 2019 1:49pm

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Thank you!

Thu, March 7th, 2019 6:58am

Mike S.

A fine poem, Bobi, and so true, you've got to keep fighting!

Thu, March 7th, 2019 6:55pm

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Thanks, Mike.

Thu, March 7th, 2019 12:12pm

Jeff Bezaire

It's great reading something from you again! Just yesterday I was wondering about you.
This is a wonderful uplifting piece. When it feels like the world is caving in on us, we forget how strong we really are and we don't realize we've been holding up the walls to our personal world our whole life. It's who and what we have around us that determines how strong we feel, but it does not determine the strength we actually have; for that, we have to keep searching deeper inside ourselves.
Terrific writing! March has kicked off with a tough start, but it's helpful reminders like this that keep the towel from being thrown in the ring.

Thu, March 7th, 2019 7:37pm

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Thank you! I sometimes question the wisdom of posting so much of my work on Booksie, but your reply just went a long way in easing my mind. Keep a firm grip on that towel, Jeff!

Thu, March 7th, 2019 12:17pm

hullabaloo22

A very motivational poem, Bobi. So well written. I've missed your work lately.

Thu, March 7th, 2019 8:44pm

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Thanks, Hully. Life gets too busy sometimes! Between an art show, being sick, translating my cousin's book, and writing furiously, I haven't had much time to post. I also get into great periods of self-doubt when I question the wisdom of anything and everything I so, so there's that too! But I do manage to force myself out (only to wonder if I'm ignoring flashing red lights! ahhhh.... the cycle!)

Mon, March 11th, 2019 4:44am

Jim Green

I very very much appreciated this poem. I've been feeling this way myself of late so its wonderful to come across this and see such wise words. Thank you.

Mon, April 1st, 2019 11:49am

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Thank you, Jim! I often feel like throwing up my hands and letting it all slide - this is my pep-talk to me! I appreciate your comment a lot!

Mon, April 1st, 2019 4:53am

Goodnight.

I love this.

Sat, June 8th, 2019 8:26am

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Thank you!

Sat, June 8th, 2019 5:03am

Douglas J Hill

It reads like silk: well-crafted.

Mon, June 17th, 2019 1:45am

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Thank you!

Sun, June 16th, 2019 6:47pm

Insane Membrane

very motivational ... and a lovely flow

Wed, August 7th, 2019 5:50pm

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I've done this before - sent something twice by mistake. Too bad there is no way to delete comments you make! (At least none I have found)

Wed, August 14th, 2019 11:31am

Insane Membrane

very motivational with a lovely flow

Wed, August 7th, 2019 5:51pm

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Thank you!

Wed, August 14th, 2019 11:30am

ShadyBrady

I like it.

Mon, August 12th, 2019 2:08pm

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Thank you!

Wed, August 14th, 2019 11:30am

Prince EL

Lovely and uplifting work, Bobi. :)

Wed, October 16th, 2019 4:30pm

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Thank you! It's been a while since I've posted or checked in, but I'm hoping to be back on track soon!

Sun, October 27th, 2019 10:04am

Sharief Hendricks

Emotive and uplifting Bobi...

I so enjoy your work...you are blessed with talent !

Loved it !!!

Tue, September 29th, 2020 1:35pm

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Wow - your words are too kind. Thank you so much for reading my work. :)

Wed, September 30th, 2020 7:47am

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