Empathy Unrestrained

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Featured Review on this writing by Jeff Bezaire


Empathy Unrestrained.

 

It hits you, unbidden

these thoughts,

these feelings,

with a force that sends

you reeling.

Conflicting wants,

conflicting demands,

swamping, swarming

without any warning

rendering you

completely numb.

How to assess

when the clamour hits

breaking sane thoughts

in to bits.

Focus, that’s what you need;

one voice to hear,

one set of thoughts to understand,

just to make things clear.

Struck by empathy,

leaving no path to take;

unrestrained and unbounded

it will lead you to break.


Submitted: March 23, 2019

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AdamCarlton

Yes, empathy is curious. You inhabit someone else's needs, want to help them on their path. But maybe that conflicts with your own path! 'Don't be a doormat,' people say!

And perhaps the other has no empathy of their own? Empathy is not the place for a one-way street.

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 7:27pm

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Yep. And then there's when you get caught in the middle of an argument. You can see both sides of it, feel both lots of frustrations, and it hits with such a force that you dare not act at all.
Thanks, Adam. I've been tied up in empathy knots a lot recently.

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 12:32pm

Sue Harris

Very powerful, Hully. Can so relate to this... its a no win situation. Great writing.

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 8:22pm

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Thank you, Sue. It can be paralyzing sometimes.

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 1:32pm

Jezzy Jay

Oh my this is so relatable, especially when words being spoken are hurtful and you can't do a thing sometimes.
Love this, keep writing
Jezzy Jay

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 9:25pm

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Thanks so much for that, Jezzy Jay.

Sat, March 23rd, 2019 2:27pm

Mike S.

Excellent, Hull!

Sun, March 24th, 2019 1:34am

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Thanks, Mike!

Sun, March 24th, 2019 8:32am

Jeff Bezaire

I love the format you used for this poem! The scattered lines as if torn apart, unable to create one cohesive train of thought; the opposing sides of the argument with you stuck in the middle. A brilliant illustration of the struggle! Well done, Hully!

Mon, March 25th, 2019 6:25pm

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Thanks so much for that, Jeff.

Mon, March 25th, 2019 11:50am

jmm424

Great poem, Hull

Mon, March 25th, 2019 6:47pm

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Thanks for giving it a read, jmm.

Mon, March 25th, 2019 11:54am

Melancholic Wisdom

I agree with Jeff, the way you've organized this poem is what really makes everything much more powerful, fantastic job

Tue, March 26th, 2019 5:50am

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Thanks so much for that, MW.

Tue, March 26th, 2019 10:42am

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