Con man conning

Won't let me edit

Empty soul hurling empty promises---- Hollow echoes reach Kool-Aid ears---- Candy promises sound sweet,---- But candy’s for children Promises promised---- But impossible to deliver


Submitted: March 28, 2019

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hullabaloo22

Excellent words, Mike. I can't edit a thing either!

Thu, March 28th, 2019 4:54pm

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Thanks, Hull, at least I know it isn't just me

Thu, March 28th, 2019 9:59am

jmm424

Good poem, Mike

Thu, March 28th, 2019 5:38pm

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Thanks, Janeen!

Thu, March 28th, 2019 10:48am

Bert Broomberg

It reads like a recipe for disaster. Well put.

Mon, April 1st, 2019 11:10am

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It sure does, thank you much, Bert!

Mon, April 1st, 2019 10:10am

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