Silent Worlds

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Review Chain

She's always sitting alone. She never says anything. She's just a "meh" of a human being... All these things Yakusoku Land hears about a classmate it's so sad... How can he not befriend her?

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Who is she again?


Yakusoku is just an average nice guy, having an unaverage bad day.
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She did what?


Hanging out with Maria Atkinson is certainly... different.
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Weird Girl Syndrome


With all the time Yakusoku is investing in Maria, everyone is beginning to get the wrong idea about their level of their relationship.
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Babble


How dare Yakusoku be with anyone but Maria... She's not going to take it lying down. And Yakusoku isn't going to let himself be hindered by fear as he decides what to do about his growing anxeity
over Maria's mysterious nature.
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What have I become?


When you're this curious about someone, breaking into their home only seem natural.
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Upscale Weirdness


He's seeing things... Yakusoku has either started cracking up, or something very real and very weird is going on in the neighborhood.
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Flagged


How could it happen? He was supposed to be in control of the situation...
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aleeha

wow...i am really impressed by your writing skills.It's awesome

Tue, April 30th, 2019 9:06am

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Thank you. I hope you read more someday

Wed, May 1st, 2019 2:08am

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Ragulose

It is good i like it,
There is nothing inherently wrong in using the same word twice in a couple of sentences. Sometimes it can even be a good thing to emphasize something that is important.
Just try not to use the same word in every sentence. If you use the same word it becomes repetitive. The same word can become boring. It shows that you can only use the same word in this context. You would have to find a new way so that you are not using the same word all the time. Try to vary instead of using the same word.

Sat, August 31st, 2019 7:46pm

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Okay. I will remember that when writing. Can you tell me what the word was?

Sat, August 31st, 2019 12:49pm

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Ragulose

She is the big one. There are many ways you can change use your synonyms it helps with this. i also posted a suggestion.

Sat, August 31st, 2019 8:09pm

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RomanBoukreev

It was a good beginning. You have a talent, definitely, for this genre. I had a backache sometimes from the 6th grade through scoliosis if you are want to know. And it's like to see the text about someone like me. What is his diagnosis, if it is not a secret? Some oncology?

Thu, February 27th, 2020 4:04pm

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Thank you. It seems darkness and mysteries are all I can write. I tried doing a love story and it stank. I really despise it. I actually had a bad migraine when doing the first chapter so I went with it. It does have a key role in the story. I hope you'll keep reading.

Fri, February 28th, 2020 1:06am

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