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Lies Of Omission

 

The things you decided

to put in to words,

the lies of omission

were what I heard.

The course was determined,

on falsity set;

I can’t say, ‘Oh, well,’

forgive and forget.

So cruel and unusual,

the unsaid like a knife

that distorted and twisted

so much of my life.


Submitted: April 04, 2019

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Mike S.

Excellent poem, Hull!

Thu, April 4th, 2019 5:37pm

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Thanks for giving it a read, Mike.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 10:47am

Jeff Bezaire

What's not said can cut deeper than what is said. It's a matter of intention and it's a matter of what's been hidden. A lot is said here without saying much. Well expressed, Hully.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 6:30pm

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I didn't want to say too much with this. Very personal which makes it harder not to go further but...
Thanks so much for giving this a read, Jeff.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 11:58am

Bobi Leutschaft Poitras

Raw and to the point. Love it! Great work, Hully.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 6:47pm

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Thank you so much, Bobi. That comment means a lot.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 12:00pm

Bert Broomberg

Beautifully done. Good job.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 8:10pm

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Thank you so much for giving it a read, Bert. I really appreciate it.

Fri, April 5th, 2019 11:53am

Sue Harris

So much hurt and heartache in this poem, Hully. So well expressed, so very hard to endure.

Thu, April 4th, 2019 9:07pm

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A very personal write, as you know, Sue. Thanks for giving this a read.

Fri, April 5th, 2019 12:00pm

jmm424

Great piece. Stay strong, Hull

Fri, April 5th, 2019 4:41pm

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Thanks so much for that, jmm.

Fri, April 5th, 2019 12:02pm

Sharief Hendricks

So sad , but I appreciated the vivid emotions in this poem Hully !

Wed, July 15th, 2020 11:46am

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Thanks, Sharief. There's more than a little bit of truth in this one.

Thu, July 16th, 2020 12:47pm

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