Spring Mountains 5

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Series of haiku depicting mountain scenes in spring part 5.

The Bears’ Beginning

Curious bear cubs
peep from their still cosy den
into their future.


Submitted: April 13, 2019

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Derina Peng

Here come four small tinny bears.

Sat, April 13th, 2019 9:27pm

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Thanks for your feedback, it is really appreciated.

Sat, April 13th, 2019 2:53pm

tom mcmullen

They're probably looking for food, good one Bert!

Sun, April 14th, 2019 9:15am

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They probably rae, but I guess that life can be difficult for young bears.

Sun, April 14th, 2019 3:02am

hullabaloo22

That first nervous look at the wider world. A big picture from a few words, Bert.

Sun, April 14th, 2019 5:11pm

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Thanks Hull. That's the idea, and I believe, also the strength of the haiku form. I appreciate your feedback.

Mon, April 15th, 2019 1:37am

jaylisbeth

Lovely haiku!

Mon, April 15th, 2019 1:58pm

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Mon, April 15th, 2019 9:08am

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