[Hiatus] Red Cross

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Chapter 13 (v.1) - Hiatus/Update

Submitted: July 12, 2019

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So yeah, I'm not really sure how to say this other than with a small update chapter. Red Cross is now on hiatus. It doesn't have many followers or regular readers, but there are still a few people out there that seem to be enjoying it and have read every chapter. For you people, I will try to continue this story as soon as possible.

I have a lot of ideas sorted out for Red Cross, it's just getting them done properly that's the problem. I think chapter 1 is great, I can't see a way to improve it. Chapter 2 is fine, although it will be receiving an overhaul. Chapter 3 is probably the weakest and definitely needs an overhaul. Chapter 4 is fine in my opinion.

And then there's chapter 5. I don't quite know why, but I am just not happy with it. I think I'll be completely redoing chapter 5. The idea that the main character has to confront part of his personality is great on paper, but I feel like I didn't do it correctly. I think the only thing I'm going to keep from chapter 5 is the Guild Master, I like his character.

Finally, the description. As mentioned in the teaser, there is going to be a task force that has to take out a mercenary army. Red Cross is going to be a trilogy, with the first part and some of the second part setting up the characters that form a team to take out the enemy faction. Hopefully you look forward to that.

That's about it. My other fiction, Heritage, will still be receiving chapters. At the end of chapter 3 of Red Cross I mention that the main character has a sister. Well Heritage is about that sister. In a sense, it's kind of a prequel. Heritage has a heavy focus on action, so if that's your thing, I hope you give it a read.

Sorry for putting Red Cross on hiatus, but I personally think it needs it.


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