the friendship oath

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Harley. is your typical girl, she enjoys sewing, writing songs, music, cooking, baking, all that jazz. speaking of jazz, her best friend jazzy finds someone else, a girl named Courtney, whos popular, but is very fake, and attempts to get Jaz to turn on Harley, and spreads rumors. Will Harley stand her ground? Or will she fall and lose everything? Will she find new people?
Read to find out :)

Table of Contents

me and jazzy

Me and jazzy had always been the best of friends since we were little, We did sometimes get into fights, like over wh... Read Chapter

2

As I walked in behind Jaz and Courtney I noticed Cole sitting in one of the tables, He smiled and waved at me, motioning for me to c... Read Chapter

Chapter 3

"Harley? Are you ok?" It was Regan.  Great just great, I'm sitting here in a dirty bathroom stall, the first day of school,... Read Chapter

chapter 4


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Chapter 5

"Holy Fucking fuck Harley!" Regan said,    I was sitting on her bed in her room. I told her what had happened with... Read Chapter

chapter 6

I ran into my room, Basically radiating happiness, I spun around and fell onto my bed. My phone chimed, There was a text from Re... Read Chapter

chapter 7

The next day at school, I saw Jazz at her locker. "What did I do?" I asked her, "What do you mean?" She replied, checki... Read Chapter

chapter 8

As I walked into class, everything around me felt dark. There were so many negative thoughts swirling around my head. I walked with my he... Read Chapter

chapter 9

Regan and cole pulled me toward their car, "Whoa wait! I can't go to the party like this!" I said "Clothes are in the backseat." Rega... Read Chapter

Chapter 10

As I walked into the living room, I noticed two things, One, A group of drunk people around Hunter and Jazz, Two, Jazz and Hunter... Read Chapter

Chapter 11

Cole walks in with blood drizzling down his shirt from his nose and his hands covered in blood, Regan looks as shocked as I feel. 'Wh... Read Chapter

Chapter 12

"So we just aren't going to talk about what happened with Cole then?" I say to regan in the car the next morning on the way to school.&nb... Read Chapter

Chapter 13

First thing I do after I get to my locker, My class, and my seat, Is write a note to Hunter. Meet me under the bleachers at lunch. We... Read Chapter

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I liked reading your first chapter. Harley and Jaz seem to have a strong friendship so it will be interesting to see how this fight eventuates between them. The tension is already building a little and it's obvious they're being pulled in different directions so there could be a dramatic build up to that which would be interesting to read.
One thing I would say is that parts of it has the feel of a stereotypical teenage story; with the rebellious group and the obnoxious preppy girl. It has the trap of falling into being a bit too predictable. What's going to make this different from other stories and make it stand out?
Though perhaps a little stereotypical, your characters are really well defined. You've described them really well and clearly. Harley is really good, especially because she hasn't really got a stereotype but she's still got a distinctive defined character.
Your start definitely a lot of potential in this. It's only the first chapter and it could go in practically in any direction so it will be interesting to see what happens. Your descriptions are really good too and that will help the story to have a strong foundation.

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