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"Amazing and beautiful! Wow!!!"
The violin speaks long, sweet:
then pivots on a whim,
nails my spine to a long
empty hall inhabited by
echoes of wooden benches.
Youth cannot stay
but its sounds
still invade
every empty place.
The past glistens on
a powdered cheek
drips into
cracks in floors
and lies there
softly until it resounds
like the thunder of something
happening in another room.
Speak in whispers
or the past will thunder.
Submitted: June 16, 2019
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Comments
Amazing and beautiful! Wow!!!
Sun, June 16th, 2019 3:29am
Hauntingly atmospheric and beautifully written.
Sun, June 16th, 2019 4:53pm
Thank you for sharing this! I loved it and read it multiple times.
Tue, July 23rd, 2019 4:53pm
Very beautiful. The words are chilling.
Wed, August 21st, 2019 3:55pm
Spooky
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Hauntingly well penned.
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