there's a lot of good people out there
Poem by: Tangelo
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but
you need to pick them like ripened raspberries.
carefully
with three fingers, maybe four
to reach out
into the bushes
between thorny stems
past the smaller, greenish-white undeveloped fruit
and the darker, moldy ones
you close your fingers on it carefully
because it might loosen its grip on you
and fall to the earth.
you roll and it pops
they're rarer and rather expensive
especially when out of season
but come now
there’s one over there.
can't see it?
look again
lower
oh not that low.
gotcha.
you place it into your basket
and it rolls around slowly
showing off all it's red and juicy splendor.
it settles in one corner
where it comes to rest in a huddle with a few others
and that's good enough for you.
so how many have you gathered?
two, three, four, a hundred and four?
you're not making raspberry jam
that's too much sugar anyway.
a quick rinse
and a quick pat dry.
they're not dirty, just...etiquette.
a homemade, layered chocolate cake awaits on your kitchen table
and you nestle the berries into the frosting on top
centered perfectly, one for each slice you're about to cut.
looks good.
there's a lot of good people out there
and you're grateful to have met even one of them.
now you're just waiting to hear the doorbell ring
Submitted: August 13, 2019
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Comments
I love the way that you took the concept of finding good people and related it to picking out fruit, quite the nice touch. I've been waiting so long to see new writing for you, and it's finally here! Well done Tangelo, glad to have you back
Wed, August 21st, 2019 7:23amFacebook Comments
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bloodman
Very nice thing to read. Good work.
Sat, August 17th, 2019 8:46pmAuthor
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Glad you enjoyed, bloodman:) thanks a lot for stopping by!
Mon, August 19th, 2019 1:57pm