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Insanely powerful, especially given the short length. There is never going to be any pleasure without pain, including relationships. But the best part of those is being there for the good and for the bad times, because anyone willing to stay with you when you're at your absolute worst, is someone that you want to have around always
Thu, September 5th, 2019 6:08am
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Absolutely. I think that love is both pain and pleasure. I don't think it's meant to be just one or the other. We learn, we grow, and move on.
Thank you for the kind words.
Those last two lines are not only true, but also rarely spoken. Your poem is very beautiful in its clean and simple style, Christian.
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This is definitely one of my favorites right here. Very well done man. Great job
Tue, September 3rd, 2019 7:46pmAuthor
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Thank you. Means alot.
Thu, September 5th, 2019 3:15pm