Out Of Body

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Comments and criticism are welcome.
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Apathy, mistaken for anger,
Apathy, the world is a stranger now,
Apathy, numb to the feeling,
Apathy, the ground is the ceiling now,
And I'll find a way,
To leave this place,
In pieces,
I'm not alone,
I found a home,
He says,
Apathy, shrouded in darkness,
Apathy, surrounded by dark mists,
Apathy, the dissonant soundwave,
Apathy, there's nothing left to save now,
I'll find a way,
To leave the grave,
When peace is,
I'm not alone,
They've found my home,
He says,
Malady, time passing, slower,
Malady, it's taking over now,
Malady, hold me I'm slipping,
Malady, I'm disappearing now,
I feel no pain,
I have no name,
I smell your lies,
See through my eyes,
I leve myself,
Hide in my shell,
This life is draining,
Apathy, leave me alone,
Malady, help me I'm drowning,
Malady, locked here in my home,
Apathy, see I was smiling.

Submitted: September 08, 2019

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You use repetition very well in this piece. Dark and thought-provoking.

Sun, September 8th, 2019 6:56pm


Thank you!

Sun, September 8th, 2019 1:26pm



Beautiful but sad piece of poetry which flows nicely,I can definitely relate to the issues described here.

Sun, September 8th, 2019 7:35pm


Thank you! I hope everything works out for you, I know writing has helped me immensely.

Sun, September 8th, 2019 1:28pm

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