Lotus On The Styx

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The piece is anything you want it to mean. I like to leave things open - more interactive that way. Although a narrative might seem to betray itself, I feel it is more to do with finding a rhythm and seeing where it goes.

Poetry rhythm wordplay surrealism

lotus on the styx

Albino sky Ebony sun Black nails roll the Sisyphus stone Nightfall on your nursery Mercury in your veins Ca... Read Chapter

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Jaslin M.

Love it!!

Mon, December 9th, 2019 7:02pm

Jaslin M.

Love it!!

Mon, December 9th, 2019 7:02pm

Flambe

This is the kind of thing I'll spend too long thinking about because I'm still trying to understand it, but I'm glad for it, this is the kind of poetry I'm jealous of

Sun, May 17th, 2020 1:57pm

Margrethe15

I wish I could be like you, a connoisseur with words. Great poem!

Sat, August 29th, 2020 5:50am

Sharief Hendricks

What a vivid piece Jobe

You truly are a wordsmith of note !!

You right this could mean so many different things...

Loved it !

Mon, November 16th, 2020 10:54am

GoddessofLove7

Alas, Onyx Embryo...That whole last part is very deep. Made me think of Mother Gaia. Ebony, Mother, sun, mercury in my veins. Love it. Very intriguing.

Thu, November 19th, 2020 7:10pm