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Table of Contents
Chapter One
Recent Comments
Poor Sam, so filled with pain. A wonderful first chapter.
Tue, October 8th, 2019 9:23pm
Poor Sam, so filled with pain. A wonderful first chapter.
Tue, October 8th, 2019 9:23pm
I am immersed so far, very enthralling, well done
Thu, October 10th, 2019 8:11pm
Haven't finished but enjoying so far. Love how descriptive you are.
Fri, October 11th, 2019 2:51am
I really liked this chapter. It is very captivating.
The way you describe the surroundings and their feelings are very beautiful. It's so...poetic...and personally, one of my favourites.
As for the plot so far, it kept me on the edge of my seat. The development is nice and slow, adding to the mystery.
All in all, I really liked it.
You are a great writer! Keep it up!
loving this so far
Fri, October 18th, 2019 1:54am
You have a great way of telling a story with beautiful vocabulary. This chapter flowed very well. I really enjoyed your eye for descriptions and conversations. I will try to get to chapter 2 soon :).
Sat, November 9th, 2019 7:00pm
You have crafted an interesting first chapter.
Tue, November 12th, 2019 5:26am
On break from school and finally getting to read it. Very intricate, detailed writing. The last line is very sad but with all that was said you have to keep reading to find out more about Susan. Great chapter one!
Sun, December 22nd, 2019 6:34am
On break from school and finally getting to read it. Very intricate, detailed writing. The last line is very sad but with all that was said you have to keep reading to find out more about Susan. Great chapter one!
Sun, December 22nd, 2019 6:34am
Real good, look at some of the words used i showed you one. but even with them it sounds fine
Fri, January 17th, 2020 12:15am
I can tell you put a lot of work into the detail and the descriptions. Very nice.
Fri, January 17th, 2020 1:42am
This first chapter is definitely quite captivating and immerses the reader into your world via very descriptive writing. You can feel the pain and conflict between the characters and even the disparity between the world itself, one moment bleak and desolate, and the next filled with light and life. I'm very interested to see how the rest of this story unfolds, especially given that last sentence.
Fri, February 28th, 2020 11:13pm
Great opening chapter. Very powerful, and quite sinister in places too. I will look forward to finishing this throughout the week.
Sun, March 8th, 2020 10:23am
Aww, poor Susan. It was a good start to the story and I am looking forward to finding out what happens next; especially with the next potential meeting between Susan's cold-hearted father and Sam. Thank you for creating this mysterious, alluring story...
Fri, April 10th, 2020 6:41pm
Hey! Just made it through Chapter 1 and I'm hooked! Great writing!
Fri, April 24th, 2020 10:48pm
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Thank you!
Fri, April 24th, 2020 4:37pm
Hi JL
Just started chapter one, wow what a vivid picture you paint of a man in pain...well done.
Will def make time to continue reading...love it !
Thanx
Sharief
South Africa
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Thank you!
Tue, June 2nd, 2020 12:26am
Thank you for the quickie and I appreciate your work.
Sat, July 25th, 2020 7:38am
I'm hooked; great first chapter.
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Shaylin Whisenhunt
I love this... thank you for sharing i will complete this book of yours sometime this week.
Mon, October 7th, 2019 11:47pm