Goodbye Mommy

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


Before I left the room Tommy asked "mommy, can you give me teddy bear?". I opened his chest full of toys and reached for the bear. I felt as if something was pulling the toy. I decide to take a look. Suddenly I'm falling into what seems to be a bottomless pit. I hear the chest close shut. I scream my sons name. Minutes later he responds "Mommy mommy are you there? Do you feel what I feel? Are you cold, afraid, alone and empty in that pit of despair? Why didn't you save me?". I'm in tears asking "what are you talking about Tommy? What's wrong?". Tommy replies "Goodbye mommy".


Submitted: October 20, 2019

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