Featured Review on this writing by Boris J. Sorokov
"Nice one! I've said it before but I'll say it again: I love how you write the dialogue between these two! As someone who struggles with giving my characters unique voices, you're crushing it!! Also, as a music fan, I love the songs in the author's notes! Love the one you picked for this chapter! ;)"
Grazing the Sky
Reads: 24481 | Likes: 20 | Shelves: 6 | Comments: 15
Book by: SpeakWhenItRains
Lance has no choice but to shrug off the event as something of his own imagination, but upon falling unconscious, he is kidnapped and injected with deadly cells from a race kept hidden from humans, a race kept secret.
Zidane is a crossbreed of Razalek and Spiro, a breathing hybrid that shouldn't exist. There's too much hatred between the races; there's too much bad blood in his veins. But he needs to save Lance's life.
He has too much death on his hands already.
However, Lance isn't so easy to trust him. So, with a question, he's teleported into Zidane's mind and introduced to a world of magic, racism, and everlasting love. Memory by memory plays, giving Lance answers to his question. Giving him every reason to trust.
He has no choice, after all.
[THIS NOVEL CONTAINS SWEARING, VIOLENCE, & ABUSE]
BOOK 1 COMPLETE
[Written from 2010 - 2017]
140,000 words, split into 100 parts.
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Behind the Lion's Eyes, Part I
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Behind the Lion's Eyes, Part II
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The Razalek with the Moon Eyes, Part I
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The Razalek with the Moon Eyes, Part II
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The Razalek with the Moon Eyes, Part III
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The Razalek with the Moon Eyes, Part IV
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Whispers of the Fallen, Part I
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Recent Comments
Sorry if any of my in-text comments sounded nitpicky! I'm just trying to help out by giving a reader's perspective. I know that sometimes you can miss stuff when you wrote it and have read it like ten times, haha! Feel free to ignore any of what I said though, they were just some thoughts I had. I was really impressed by this :) Really interesting, and I'm already invested in your protagonist! I'm really excited to read more, I plan on it! Awesome work :D
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Hi hi hi!
Thank you for the comments! One little thing I wanna mention is this writing is REALLY OLD. Maybe around 4 years old? So um yeah. Totally agree with your suggestions though haha.Thanks again and I look forward to more of your thoughts.
I like these descriptions. A good introduction places the main points in the plot.
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it
Fantastic first chapter. I loved how the dream started off so calmly with the blue, before those colors changed and it became nightmarish. Good descriptions of the physical pains, and I liked the warnings, especially when there was a mystery about where they were coming from.
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Thank you!!
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