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"A well-polished and thought-provoking first chapter that hooked my interest with its blend of emotional crisis and unsolved drama. I enjoyed the twists and turns offering this opening world inside the main character's head. The pacing and voice are rock solid. "
Through Mist And Veil
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Book by: hullabaloo22
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NaNoWriMo Winner 11/28/2019.
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Recent Comments
And so we're off! This is very promising: clear scene setting, a sympathetic and troubled protagonist.. and a mystery. Wow!
Only 98% or so to go :)!
A promising start, Hull!
A great start. It arose my curiousity to read on. Easy to read too. It should can put reader on the spot.
This is a good, punchy beginning, setting out the scene nicely. The pace is good, as is the character of Caitlin, whose education is suffering as she tries to come to terms with the disappearance of her father. Very readable, Hully, great job!
A great mystery novel.
The characters are believable, and the writing is good.
I’m loving this beginning, Hully! It drew me in right away and I can’t wait to read the rest of her story. I also like that her name is exactly the same as mine; it’s actually pretty rare for me to see that spelling.
A great opening chapter, Hully! Wonderful character development and backstory; a good mystery already tugging at the curiosity chords.
What a wicked teacher! Right from the get-go, the drama's strong; the story offers much promise. Good narrative flow.
A well-polished and thought-provoking first chapter that hooked my interest with its blend of emotional crisis and unsolved drama. I enjoyed the twists and turns offering this opening world inside the main character's head. The pacing and voice are rock solid.
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