Eyes don't lie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


Don’t look
in the mirror
Just look
in my eyes
Don’t listen
to people
Just listen to
my heart beats...

 


Submitted: November 12, 2019

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hullabaloo22

This says so much more than the actual words. Really well done.

Tue, November 12th, 2019 9:09pm

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Thank you so much for your kind words : )

Wed, November 13th, 2019 12:45am

Melancholic Wisdom

This is a really sweet poem, well done

Wed, November 13th, 2019 6:35am

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Thank you so much :)

Wed, November 13th, 2019 12:42am

Derina Peng

Sweet and convincing poem. Very nice. Now where are your eyes?

Wed, November 13th, 2019 12:22pm

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Lost. Glad you liked it :)

Thu, November 14th, 2019 2:44am

jctolliver

Lean on the person who loves you most. I love it.

Wed, November 13th, 2019 8:22pm

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Exactly. Thanks for the read : )

Thu, November 14th, 2019 2:45am

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